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for Shards of Life

by Cepheus

person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god that was amazing to read. I loved that. I even love the ending. I mean I really want to know what happnes next, but then I also don't see any better ending!
Thx for writting this it was awesome to read.
person AoiNikko
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was nice...

I got it right away, that Sasuke went into the past and Naruto was with him. It was a niiiice change from what I usually see in the fandom. Damn, you are good at this... I think you have a fan for life here.
person Memphis Atari
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
at first it thought this story was moving too slow.. was boring.. but i perservered and i can say that you left me in awe. the circumstances are chilling and Sasuke's position is sadly pathetic. Its nice to know that not everything has a happy ending for the "hero" much as we'd like it to be :D beautiful. loved it.
person Nova
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke-kun! But it was very beautifully written. I almost cried, really.
person Julia
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfic. It is very educational. It teaches people to appreciate things they've got. Also it satisfies our need for angst. Characters in your fanfic and in manga were really alike.
Also you seem to hate/deslike Sasuke, I feel the same. Especially I hate him when he acts coller than Sasuke(or when he gets more votes than Uzumaki does). But I like SasuNaru pairings nonetheles. They just fit eachother beautifully. By the way I wonder what made you write a ÝtaNaru fanfic? You know Ýtachi and Naruto astrologicaly fit each other. ;)
person tuh
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful...
person chineseartist
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
............wow. that was ...... I don't know how to describe it. It was emotional and torturous and absolutely awful (for Sasuke) and ......... I loved every word of it. i don't know where you got the inspiration for this, but keep on doing what you're doing. I hope your muse continues to grace you with excellent inspiration and i look forward to more stories from you.
person dawn
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, just amazing!
I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this story. The whole idea of it just impresses the hell out of me! I've never read anything like this before, it's an entirely original concept to me.
To give something up, to get something else, only to discover that what you gave up was worth 100 times the thing that you wanted. Talk about bitter, bitter irony. Poor stupid Sasuke!
You did a beautiful job on this story!
I've read a lot of your writing both here and on ff.net and honestly, in my opinion this is the best, or at least my new fav! Kind of sad it's a one shot, but I guess you can't really take it any further without really going out on a limb.
I always look forward to what you will write next, but now I'm looking forward to it with even more enthusiasim!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hauntingly beautiful and sad. Sasuke deserved this for pushing away Naruto like this, now he must pay.
These days the ItaNaru pairing really appeals to me, so I thank you for sharing your works.
person Kaishiou
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is beautiful. really beautiful. that shall teach Sasuke to treasure what he has. haiz >_<