rate_review Reviews

Words cannot express how beautiful a piece this was. I rarely read oneshots because I find them too short or not enough depth behind the emotions, but you've made me realize how beautiful they can be. You wrote a completely original piece that managed to tell an entire tale and have enough emotional depth to make me tear up a few times. I've never read a piece that was so well thought out and satisfying to read. You've done a marvolous job and I now have to read any other work you have! To me this review seems inadequate to what you submitted but I hope it at least lets you know what a wonderful job you have done. You should feel very proud of yourself, this is a piece of writing that is so unique and heartfelt that I doubt I will ever find something like it again. Thank you most dearly for posting this.

this is so sad! :(
but it's really touching too.. i guess it kinda serves sasuke right.
*sniff sniff*

WOH, WOAAHHH... Great! WOW
sorry this fic so great I don't know what how I can describe how much I liked it... WOW!!

Oh my fucking god. This is amazing. Possibly one of the best, BEST pieces of naruto (actually, scratch that, ANY ) writng I have seen on this site.

You. Are. Incredible for writing this.

Everything was so well done. In character and so real. The motivation behind everyones actions...just...so on target.

If people read this and don't review it, they're kidding themselves. It's for mind-numbing stories like this that I read fanfiction. I only hope one day that I will rise to be such an amazing author as yourself.

Seriously, words can't describe how amazing this is. *has the most serious face I've ever had on*

It was very confusing at first for me(and angsty), but then in the middle when I got where this is going...I just went..MUAHAHAHAHA, you stupid emo Sasuke! You don't deserve Naru-chan! Itachi owns him now!(I'm a rabid Ita/Naru fan as you can see.) Very well written about the pyschological torment Sasuke went through, and I like how you put in what is happening with Naruto in vague excerpts. Just to let you know, I love all your stories!

This is truly amazing!

I loved it, you'rea talented wrighter
I hope to see more, and the poem was great.

very deep. excellent!

Outstanding job! It was very deep and unexpected. Very moving. I had to read it twice. Just realized that you are also the author of many of my favorite stories, so I'm not surprised at how much I enjoyed this story.

OMG!!!!!

That was very good...lol...I had to read it again to enjoy the irony. Sasuke was a fool and for once I am glad someone wrought a point to prove that Sasuke was wrong in his plans. I loved the work, and I'm a Itachi/Naruto fan, so it turned out great for me. lol. I always knew that Naruto could help Itachi before he fell, I'm glad someone wrought about it. It was very good. Oh man...is it too much to ask more of Naruto and Itachi? Maybe from Naruto's point of view, or maybe a new fic about them? I really enjoyed reading this one, and talent like this should be shared, please please write more!!! lol

email me if you happen to write more of Itachi and Naruto....that's if I'm not being to pushy...sorry I can't help great work. sessephinucloud@yahoo.com

I hope to read more of your work in the future!!!!!

Laters....