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for Shards of Life

by Cepheus

person darktoy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE YOU SON OF A...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, you learn! you needed to lose every single thing you had in order to understand! Serves you right! TEME!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ok, I know It hurts, I feel bad for the poor guy.... but really.... Sasuke I'm so hating you for this....)

Naruto, suffering like that... Thank god for the faithfull meeting with Itachi... Now, If only Sasuke would learn the meaning of "MOVE ON" everything would be nice wouldn't it?

I'm in the mood to keep writing my fic...

I love this shot, and I am Thankfull to you Cepheus for letting me read the beginning... It was worth to wait!!!!!

Now now... gotta work and use the little time I have now that Aniki has gone party!
person InfinitusNyx
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds so confusing at first but if you think about it...it's understandable. kawaisou(poor) sasuke...not really. much love for ItaNaru pair.
person zrina
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah... Very Very nicely done. Once again The Naruto Effect takes place!! You did an awesome job. Your writing skills made the story clear and easy to follow, excellent job. I enjoyed it very much.
person redtatsu
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm speachless. I can't find the words to describe this story. I love this! I now have to go back and reread this so I can sniff some more. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
person Annie
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story, I loved it. It was so heart wrenchingly sad and beautiful. However, I think you went a little crazy with the enter key. Also I'm pretty sure renounce is a transitive verb. It's a tiny observation that I noticed as I was reading. Anyhow keep up the good writing.
person clouded
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Wow...
There were some errors but never mind that.
It was kinda confusing but it was really good.
Poor Sasuke. How regretful.
It's nice to have a kind of perspective showing that Itachi might not have turned out the way he did if he really did have someone that is in a way too similar with himself yet different as well.