rate_review Reviews

I read this a while back, though the last chapter wasn't there and well...you really need to update!

This is definitly a darker story compared to the others, but I like it.
Just please finish with Ino and her cousin and give Naruto a break, lots of lovey-dovey(ahah, I never wrote that before) momments with Sasuke to cure him

This is definitly a darker story compared to the others, but I like it.
Just please finish with Ino and her cousin and give Naruto a break, lots of lovey-dovey(ahah, I never wrote that before) momments with Sasuke to cure him

I really hope you'll update that one. The split personality scene gave me goosebumbs and nearly made me cry. Sasuke really has no idea just HOW easy he has it in comparison to Naruto's life and childhood. Most people just have the happy-go-lucky Naru who complains a little. Honestly, I don't know how Naruto made it as far as he has without breaking down.

Reviewing Chpt 5. Thanks for redeeming Sakura a bit! I read your note saying you were thinking of Naruto forgiving the girls. -I would love if he forgave Sakura, though it looks like she's probably going to die in the process. I'm glad you're not making her completely evil, I love her.

I really liked the rape scene. I like FxM, especially with the girl penetrating the boy in some way. The fisting was really hot!

I loved that really long lemon! All the begging and the way he dominated her and the way they walked dirty. That was hot fucking!

Chpt 7. Wow, what happened between Sasuke and Naruto, with Naruto tied up, was hot. All those things Sasuke was saying, the way he promised to protect Naruto, and that he was Naruto's master was incredibly hot. How he promised to heal and punish Naruto at the same time... Mmmm, that was delicious.

I really dislike Sakura in this story but also I feel teribbly sorry for her when she's desperate and beggs stupidly like that. Ino is really sad and disgusting too. But weirdly I find myself liking this story so I wait in anticipation for you to update soon. I love Naruto and even Sasuke. I feel so sad for Naruto he's in so much pain (very well drawn pain, well written pain) He split himself up into several personalities or was his spliting his mind up due to the forbiden jutsu? What kind of jutsu was used? and what were the affects of it? anyway hope you update soon.

Finally! I almost thought that you vanished. Oh please continue!!

wow.. the sudden schizophrenia attack is really cool... the double personality thing awesome.. I certainly love the part where Sasuke got the bulge in his pants AND i am so happy Sasuke called for the Anbu opts... can;t wait for the next chapt ne?