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for Inner Sanctum

by nekochannya

person PlotAficionado
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous read. I was at the edge of my seat the whole time! Totally didn't get any of the work I needed to done. I blame you for your excellent plot and devious mind.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what's wrong with you worrying about a blazin chapter. i can't wait to see what sasuke does to ino and her cousin they are on my list. although i do wonder why sasuke didn't try to apprehend sakura before she could go and give ino the heads up. does ino's cousin care more about her or naruto. is he going to give her a nasty surprise when it comes to a choice between them (i would love that). it would serve her right. i was just thinking about this story the other day but couldn't remember the title or who wrote it. i am a fan of this can't be happening and isn't funny that you are writing both fics. come to think about it updating this can't be happening would be kind of slick too. i also want to know if you will ever do any more chapters for the kalediscope. thanks and can't wait til the next update.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* great story, i just reread/skimmed the first few chapters, and the 7th chap is looking good! i can't wait to see what happens, so PLEASE update! i'm a sucker for sasunaru, and occasional saku- and ino-bashing is good. i really love the theme and atmosphere you've got going here. i eagerly await those bitches comupence.~
person nawatia
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG - Finally!!! I thought I was hallucinating when I saw the title with an *updated* next to it! I was so excited to read this new chapter, that I read it too fast, and am now dizzy. I will have to read it again, but slower next time. I'm glad you are back!!! However will Naruto react to hearing Sakura outside? does he hear her? AH! So many questions! Welcome back! Whew...I gotta go sit down...oh, I am sitting. Ok, some slow deep breathing...calming calming....hoooookay. I'm better now. I will be keeping my eyes open for the next chapter!
person cutsycat
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and loved it. It's very well written. I can't wait to see the rest of it. Though I do hope that Sasuke can succeed in fixing Naruto and that the story will have a happy ending at least. :D
person mscs3
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! Claps hands...love the new chapter (and the length!!) ummm...looking forward to more of this and This Cant be happening! Hugs Me
person SammyD
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
COME ON!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person cool
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool
person Onawa
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, Just checking back...and was thinkin....

Perhaps what naruto needs is a good dose of reality...To know what Sasuke really feels and thinks. Perhaps if Sasuke spewed emotionally, just snapped and expressed (even kind of messily)how he felt about Naruto, what happened to him, what Naruto's suicide attempt did to him...

Sasuke has been very gentle, and coddling (sp), Naruto has been able to coast along in his own wounded psyche, almost asleep. Naruto needs to be woken up. Naruto is not normally this selfish, he has managed to twist things so that by doing what he wants (suicide) he thinks that others will be better off - when it is just not so...he needs to recognize how others love and need him.

Whew - I'll stop typing now...
person Onawa
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sending you wishes of hope and support! I have been checking back regularly in hopes of an update. This has been such an intense story so far, and very well written. I am happy you are continuing with it!