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for Inner Sanctum

by nekochannya

person Hestia
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! How evil, evil, evil of Ino and Sakura!!! Yea for Iruka! Yea for Tsunade! Oh Sasuke--how sweet! More please!!!
Thanks for sharing!
person Oscar
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG,this story is a complete masterpice, everything that happened was entirely unexpected and well thought of. Right now I cant wait to see what will happen with Naruto next another rape? submission? slave? Theres so many posibilities thats driving me crazy, althought I really want a happy end (or not) Im curiouse to know, what will happen if Ino's cousin returned again?
person Ai_Kyou_Gokai
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing.keep wrighting. its great.
person dut
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh its really sad and heart wrenching....It's kinda sweet to see Sasuke emotional over Naruto... Damn the two bitches! hope you can update soon~
person oraday
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Yet... I'm really kinda sad. I hate that Naruto is suffering. Most of all, I hate that it's so severe that it's going to last a while. I'm glad the persecution of Sakura and Ino is progressing. I thought revenge would be a long time in coming, but it doesn't seem so. Really I don't want Sakura and Ino to suffer physically. I want them to be in mental agony for every day of their miserable lives. I want them to live for centuries with the type of mental anguish Naruto is facing because of them. It won't make up for what happened to Naruto, but Sasuke and Tsunade will feel better.

Really though, I don't see Naruto wanting revenge. I think he'll be sad if Sakura and Ino will have to go through anything like what he's going through. I don't think Naru's anywhere near mean enough to wish that pain on anybody. I half expect him to forgive them, though I'm certain he will never be able to be their friend again.

Well, they deserve to lose the greatness of Naruto's friendship for their actions. Can't wait for your next update. I love it when Sasuke takes care of Naruto^.^
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ This story is amazing! Its also so sad, it made me want to cry <( You have to hurry and update, cause its awsome!
person sasunaruuuuu~!
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Sasu/Naru h/c! <3~ I was afraid it would be a dark gory fic where Sasuke was the one torturing poor Naruto, but the joy! when I realised it wasn't Sasuke that had hurt him!! And he really loved him !!!!

<333 *squee*

Pwease keep writing? Pretty pwease~! *^--^*

*anticipates much fluffy joyful h/c-ness*!
person trulywicked
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're wonderful do you know that? Really I'm insanely happy that Naruto being taken care of by Sasuke.I'm shaking with anticipation over the revenge that is coming and I'm having lots of ideas involving rearing tiny strips of skin off slowly then pouring salt or lemon juice on the skinless area and acid drops on hands and tender body parts(grins evilly) All I can say about the Godaime is "Alright Tsunade!You ROCK!" and so do you Eien_no_Ren-sama.
person Hello
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Sakura and Ino to get what they deserve. Poor Naruto, all broken. Hope Sasuke will fix him... in a good way.
person darktoy
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness Sakura wasn't called! I was going to go rampage on your ass if she hurted naruto any further!!!
Anyway, yeah! Sasuke get some revenge! The proof is there, you just have to look.
The time those two and Naruto dissapeared, obviously must be the same. And even a bunshin should be noticed... And for th forbidden jutsu used on Naruto, must have left a trace... a hint of the Chakra of the one who used it!
Or Ask Kyuubi himself!! For fuck's sake! Blood test, time laps... witnesses! Watch some movies for the love of Ramen!!!!!!!! (shots herself)

I'm getting carried away... anyway... UPDATE SOON!