rate_review Reviews

WoW......This story is so dark and ummm...yeah. Ignore my lack of vocabulary words used to describe your story. I love your story. Can't wait to read more! Keep on writing!!

normally don't read these (rape fics)... but I was in a dark mood tonight...really wonderful writing!!... now I want to keep up with it just to see Sasuke hopefully kill them slowly.. like maybe cutting them to pieces one joint at a time??... hmm.. or cutting off their hands so they can't ever harm anyone, writing "rapist", "slut" and "psycho" into their arms and faces with a kunai.. possibly hideously disfiguring them??.. well.. they deserve it!!

looking forward to their humiliation and pain!!..^^

Wow....just wow. The first time I read this, it was so vivid I started shaking and threw up... Your writing is incredibly potent and vivid, very realistic and very truthful. I definitely appreciate that you included female rapists (I'm a female, and I certainly agree that my gender is capable of raping either gender). I'm actually a Sakura fan (though I like SasuNaru fanfiction only) (in the anime she's really not dumb, just a normal 12 year old with a schoolgirl crush who will grow out of it later, we ALL were like that when we were younger) and I normally don't like Sakura bashing, but it happens a lot in the fan fiction world. Hey, its FAN FICTION, that means you can do whatever you want with the characters, and if people don't like your changes then they shouldn't be reading fanfiction in the first place. Either way, I think your writing is actually incredibly prolific, very brutally honest, and nakedly open with the subject. I highly appreciate this, and find your fiction to be vastly more mature than most I read (not that i mind it, if I didnt' like it I wouldnt' read it). I've been unable to get this story out of my head all day, and its been randomly causing me to start shaking. I'm sure my friends are concerned....THAT is a good thing, that writing has the ability to cause that strong of a reaction. I should be desensitized to these topics, infact I normally am, but your story simply resonates in a more heavy and powerful manner than most. To be honest, its almost like you have experience with the topic, though I hope to god not. Its not a pleasant thing to experience. i know.

Either way, you deserve much praise for your writing, and while I eagerly await the next few chapters, I know it might take a few to get revenge formulated onto the girls....which I hope is wicked and violent and mindfuckingly annihilating. Either way, keep writing. I dont' know if I can take much more trauma to Naruto, or even Sasuke, as just witnessing his friend's altered state has already wounded him deeply. But my cruel side is out and I await torture to the girls.....eagerly.

omg i loved this story. por naruto i hope sasuke takes care of him. I have always hated ino and sakura theyre both so stupid throwing themselves at sasuke like they have no decency. i hopeyou keep wrighting because i want to see what happens. i hope those biotches die XD

Well they say that revenge is a dish best served cold.(pictures Sasuke getting revenge on Ino and Sakura and smiles) That was good, I cried again in a bittersweet way, cause Sasuke cares so much about Naruto but at the same time Naruto's so traumatized. You're such a good fanfic author.

Poor Naru-chan! This chapter almost made me cry! Hurry and update! This is a good story and if you dare start to stop updating then I shall torture you!

Death rides a pale horse and certain someones are going to be seeing that horse before they know it. If Sasuke does not do it there are several others that will. But Uhicha's are known for there possessiveness. I can't wait to read more keep it coming.

Yes, revenge. Ino and Sakura deserve whatever Sasuke would do to them, poor Naruto. :( Update soon. :D

Woah. Sakura and Ino are in for it now. I would feel sorry for them if it hadn't been Naruto that they hurt. Of all people, how could anyone hurt Naruto!

Well, the rape symptoms Naruto has are very appropriate. I know he's gonna get better though. It seems Kyuubi's helping out with that.

I love the prospect of Sasuke protecting his Naru-chan. Can't wait for the next chapter^.^

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! HE KNOWS, HE KNOWS, HE KNOWS!!!!!!!!!

Sasuke, you have My both holy and unholy blessings! Make them pay! Make the title of Avenger be fit for you!!! Kills those Bitches!!!!!!!! Torture them, make them pay dearly for their wickedness!!!!!

(You got me very... I'm... I don't Know! I WANT TO KILL THEM MYSELF!!!)

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE; THIS FIC IS MAKING ME GO ALL PSYCHO!