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by nekochannya

person Devils-Advocate3
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O God.......I cried for him....;_;...(still crying).....(trying to wipe tears away)....Anyway(still trying to stop crying) I......god please in someway have sasuke love naurto....;_;....Please. I love naruto so much and it hurts to see him in pain......And out of all people....to me.......naruto is the last person who deserves to be in pain....;_;........Please......(crying some more)......For example.......can you have sasuke.....love naurto so much.......and when naruto tries to ovoid sasuke.....Sasuke tries to find out why.........And while doing so, also tries to prove to naruto just how much he loves him.....(wiping away tears again)....sniff,...sniff, sniff...And latter,......some how, sasuke finds out what that bitch sakura, and Ino did to naruto........Probably by hearing them talk about it.....how they enjoyed his pain......and finding out just how totally FUCKED UP THEY REALLY ARE!.............(just finally starting to stop crying).......And I don't know.....Sasuke fucks them up some how........I don't really care how........Just as long as they get theirs in the end............And then, sasuke.........He proves to naruto that...., no matter what..., he will always love naruto...That he will care and protect naruto till the day he die's.......And naruto starts to trust....and slowly love sasuke.......And I don't know....They move in together.....and...Sasuke has not yet went all the way with naruto.....Of course they've pleasured each other.....but never when all the way.....^^ and one day naruto is ready to go all the way with is lover.....So when sasuke comes home.....^_^ (giggling with a tear stained face) He gets the best surprise of his life. Lol but that’s just a long example of what I wish, and hopes happens. ^_^.
(Smile) Any-who,......sad but still great chapter. ^^ O and I just so you know I so believe guy's can be raped by girls....And that's probably one of best ideas you had in this chapter......Because no has ever written about that,.....well so fare that I have read at least.......And yes, that is sad........but true.....Anyway I can't wait for your update. And may it be soon. ^_^ Latter.
Kisses ^_~
person trulywicked
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried. Poor Naruto, you are gonna have a happy ending right? and you're gonna have Ino and Sakura punished right? Please at the very least let karma kick the little bitches in the ass. This fic is emotionally wrenching and I will continue reading if only to find out if there's a happy ending coming.
person oraday
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't really stomach the rape, so I kinda glossed over it, but I like the premise as far as the plot goes. I hope there will be some type of rectification/consolation for what they did to Naruto. He really doesn't deserve such treatment... Then again, no one does. It's just worse that it should happen to him since he's so pure and kind.

Well, I hope you'll continue this, 'cause now I want revenge against Sakura and Ino.
person Hello
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto, being blamed at what he shouldn't. Damn Ino and Sakura. Sich bitches, raping him when he didn't want to, it's not his fault, his body reacting to the simulations. Tsk, tsk. Hope someone will help him.
person darktoy
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'M GONNA KILL THOSE BITCHES!!!!!!!!!! FUCKING WHORES!!!!!!!! aAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!*screams of desperation*

SASUKE TAKE REVENGE FOR NARUTO!!!!!!!!!!!

AND YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU!°!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nomme de Plume
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, are you continuing from here? cause i think it'll be super cool for naruto to go unconscious and kyuubi take over and completely rampage in konoha for a while, then calm down and reveal what those bitches did! cause, yeah, the village might not believe naruto's word over the girls', but they'd damn well listen to kyuubi. and then, those two should be brought before kyuubi and tremble in fear and terror while he threatens to eat them, and then they die by sasuke's or kyuubi's hand. yeah. you should totally do that.

or not. whatever. but i totally think i just fed myself my own plot bunny. anyway, even though this fic was different and it made me madder than hell what those bitches did (btw, how in hell could ino and sakura of all people capture naruto?), i guess i still like it from a literary stand point. i look forward to reading how you resolve this.
person j_narusasu_c
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story's great... good for sadist people (like me!) when will sasuke arrive? Please continue! I like it...
person j_narusasu_c
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, that was one torture that i usually dont want to read... but still, it'll be sasu/naru right? the story's ok the only part i dont like is when he was tortured by the genins at 8 years old. so sad
person hitsufangurl
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue!!!! Im an Angst reader for some reason, I dont care for character deathes, but I enjoy a cry every now and then!! I usually want read story's unless there at least 6 pages long, but I have read your other story (which I check ever day for updates) So I figured I would try reading this one even if it was only 1 page. Keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!
person trulywicked
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say continue but please have a happy ending.