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heh. im not really that into lemons, but i am curious as to wtf ire is doing, and who she'll be with next. hrry up and write ^^ also, email me when you update. my email is deannathx@comcast.net

I think this has the ability to be an absolutely great lemon but it needs some work first. I suggest you expand the sex scenes, add more detail. Just take your time and you should do great.

It better be Sasuke...or Kiba...or Neji, but Sasuke's the BEST TRUST ME (.^_^.) lol. This is good, minor errors that you'll catch if you proff read. Humm? I wonder what she wants with all of them. Could it be their chakra or does she want a child with all their poweres combined. Wait, is she even human...don't know but you do have some evil sceme after all the lemons, that's for sure...or in the lemons...ohhhhhh. Well update soon cuz i want to known who the lucky guy is... :)

i bet you the girl is naruto in descise probaly lost a bet or something but u never no i wonder who the lucky guy is