rate_review Reviews

Wow!!! This is one beautiful piece of writing. I just finished chapter three and just loved it! You are a superb writer. What a cool & hot chapter. You are so..so good with Hinata and Naruto!

Kakeru is a grade S bastard and I hope Naruto goes six tails on his pathetic scaly butt so he can rip him apart!

Like...Wow. o_O

UM,You've Outdone Yourself.

Kankeru Is The Meanest Piece Of Shit I've Witnessed So Far...After Katai And Sakai,Of Course.And How Dare He Say Hinata Wasn't Pretty Enough?!That's Enough To Make ME Go After HIS Sorry Ass!Also,A Lump Of Chakra?! *Growls*

He's So Hateable That I'm In Love With His Maliciousness.

Also,Please,I Want To Hear Him Realize Hinata's Beautiful. *Blushes*

And Naruto.So Sweet.Obviously,He Cares About Hinata And Wants To Save Her.

Somehow,I Enjoyed The Fact You Put Such Humor Even Into The Vicious-est Of Dark Scenes.

Yosho,Kosu,And Hiruko Are Pretty Cool Characters.Yosho's Much Better,Actually.The Verbal Battle Between Him And Hinata.

I Want...You Know What I Want.

On To Next Chapter!

It's only the first chapter and I already love it! Go Naruto!!! I love it when he's happy. So much saddness in his life he deserves to be happy. Good job with your story and best of luck with future ones.
Butterfly Beauty

Wow your second chapter is long. I like it. I enjoy long chaptered stories with many chapters. Looking forward to reading the rest, tomorrow maybe but hopfully soon. I enjoy your story.
Butterfly Beauty ~ Wishing you good luck, best wishes, and bessings to be yours.

I'm eagerly waiting the upcoming fights, nice touches on Ryuugakure's destruction and Sakura's guilty pleasure.

I stumbled across your storyand after a cautious eyeing I began to read it. I was instantly hooke and read the story through in nearly one go from the beginning to the end, only stopping because it was getting far to late to continue reading with the proper concentration. First thing in the morning I continued with the story and i must say, this story is fantasstic a masterpiece, certainly one of the best stories I have read so far, and wonderfully set out and thought out. Though if the seal needs so much chakre and they are after the bijuu, then wouldn`t Akatsuki not take notice? Also how would they extract the bijuu from the Jinchuurike, as I do not think they have enough persons of enough power to perform the technique that Akatsuki uses. So a mystery remains. oh yes and for god´s sake Sakura and Yakusho ahould get their act together and stop dithering around, I mean it is so clear that Sakura was the cause of much of his repentance andjis actions clearly show that.
P.S.:I wonder who would be stronger. kagura (boss raccoon) or Gamabunta(boss toad)?
P.P.S.: I hope we see the raccoons again, I like them.

Excellent chapter again, I figured things would be tying up but looks likes there are more things to come.

Very good indeed. I presume there will be a more detailed chapter about Jiyumaru's tragedy, unless Ayame has already explained it all and it doesn't need to be discussed further. I think the wait was well worth the 17 pages of reading, as it was very fulfilling. :3