rate_review Reviews

Excellent work on the fight scene. I was a little confused on the red glowing eyes part it took awhile to figure out it was a new character and not a old one that was trying to escape the hospital.

And yet another excellent chapter from UM. I recommend people to not just read this story, but to try and strike discussion about it at our website as well. After all, the more the merrier.

Hooray for updates! Hinata held her own quite excellently in this chapter, and she managed to win with Kyuubi's power, though she may not be completely aware of how she did it. Now Naruto needs to get her and the rest of his team back to Konoha, and, later, find out who was leading that mission to capture Hinata and kill him. After all, Naruto was the only one not in the fight. But considering how little time he's had with Hinata recently, and the fact that she left the alter and her family to be with him, they really deserve some time to themselves first. A great chapter with a well-written fight scene, and now you've really got me excited for the next chapter!

This is one great story... even if it is depressing a majority of the time. I hope you will continue it soon; things are really getting interesting.

Dude this chapter was fucking sweet as well as Yakusho's transformation. I've always dreamed about doing that kind of thing ever since I saw American Dragon: Jake Long. Keep up the good work and get the next chapter out fast because the suspense is killing me.

Just wondering if you are going to put anymore sex into the story.... This story rocks but i feel that it is lacking in that department

So Yakusho is the traitor, figured someone was.
I'm curious as to where this is going and how Hinana's fight will go down so
I'll naturally keep reading this.

yakusho is a traitor....one of the best fight scenes ever.... you have definately given us a lot to soak in this chapter. If Sakura did die though.... I think I would be seriously pissed. Please tell us she's alive :-)

Well... In the past two chapters you've managed to kill my two favorite characters in the entire Narutoverse. Your OCs seem a bit too powerful for how numerous they are... Having the good guys dropping like flies brings a feeling of resignation to me whilst I read rather than one of suspense.

Awesome fight scene between Tenten and the OC, I have a slight idea on who they're working for
but I'll read on to see if my theory is correct.