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WOW that is all I could say. So when she changed in chapter 5 to this chapter it was a tailed beast that is within her or is it something else. I hope you update soon. What kind of monster does she have inside of her now. And from being in a rage and such bloodlust she didn't realize she attacked her friends and hurt them all pretty bad except Naruto who had to stop her before she did worst.

great update. It was definately worht the wait. Please update as soon as possible.

This chapter always did make me smile with dark content, loved it when I first read it and love it now.
Once again, awesome plot twist which I will support all the way and everyone else will give the
'WTF' response, and an awesome fight scene with Hinata owning things with a pulse, or rather the Chimera but
it's the same thing in the end :).

Hey great update... But what got into Hinata she is never ummm that forward and second how did it all happened... If you can help me understand what just happened a lil better I will be most obliged.. JTB8834@aol.com

What is that thing in the tent? What is it? I must know! Update soon with an answer or, it won't be pretty. ;) Very good so far! keep up the great work!

OMFG................wow.... i HAVE TO SAY i WAS GETTING WORRIED ABOUT HOW LONG IT WAS TAKING YOU TO UPDATE, BUT LET ME TELL YOU IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT. Dam good chapter. The writing style was superb, the whole story flowed together and connected flawlessly. Word choice and language were perfect. You really have outdone yourself on this one. On top of all that this chapter was both very funny and sexy. I actually reread it after I sobered up to make sure it was as good as I thought it was. I still cannot beleive it turned out so well. (As a side note though, half a bottle of vodka and AFF is a great combination. :P )

Do I honestly need to tell you what I think of your latest chapter when you already know what I think of it? :) Ah well I'll do it anyways, uber hot threesome ftw! I already told you my other comments on MSN so continue the good
job you're doing.

This is an awesome story!

Purity? What? But Hinata isn't pure anymore anyway. She had sex with Naruto. XD (Will the clan find out about that?) I'm interested in what will happen. Please update soon! NaruHina forever!

Once again good work, It's funny, I was thinking inside my head that Hiashi would help out Naruto before I read this, and he does in your story, I await the next chapter.

As I already mentioned to you on MSN your fight scene rules, and chapter three was naturally hot
and of course I liked the plot twist (not sure if anyone else will but at least you get my support),
continue with this awesome story.