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for Dragonheart

by UmbreonMessiah

schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! two chapters in a row.... you're doing better at updating then I am these days XD

good job... thanks for fixing some of those typos 'n stuff.

I don't know why you thought I'd be pissed off with the ending of Chapter 3 O.o

how many more till.... till... *sniffles and dissolvese into tears* OH GODS NO!!!!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Captain! load the catapaults."
"Catapaults loaded sir!"
"Good job, now we shall teach the fool the errors of their ways...... ready, aim, fire!"
*and so the flames rain down*
Why a cliffy!?!?!?!
great story though, i am truly glad that you chose to update, I though that you were going to let this story burn out. I am glad that you did not. Great job and please update soon. The suspense is painful.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update loved the fight scenes. Naruto and Hinata are together but nothing happened. Ryumoto Yakusho is like Sasuke a brooding person who is anti social and an ass. Hope to seethe next chapter and looking forward to everything you have in store... Thanks Silver Warrior for the fights and keep up the great work
person Kilrath
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another excelent chapter, i look forward to seeing more of this story.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good stuff. please update soon :)
person Heart Gaze
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm in love with your story! XD PLEASE update soon! And more NaruHina fluff! I assume there will be a lemon because its rated NC-17? ;D *winks*

Something should happen to Hinata and Naruto worries over her and stuff.. Love those types of fics. anyway update soon! ^^
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
must have more. great job. you can now officially sit at the cool kids table.
person kyubi_teaser
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After much hounding *KIDDING!* I finally got to stop by and read it. I think you've done a great job so far, and I'm glad to see my suggestion went off so well. :-P Looking forward to more

~Teaser

ps-KT was Here!

person Dim song
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice first i love pairing and im cant wait for the rest on this fire dude
person silent pluto
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoaa, now this story is getting interesting!
I just love it!!!
Oh my god, Hinata reads smut?! mwhahahaha now that's funny.
Well hey she is human right? lol
I wonder who that new guy is, I doubt he's got amnesia, I just
think he's an ass. Like kakashi. lol
Great job, keep up the good work!