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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude this was soooo good please keep updating. i love the way the storys going(cause i olny read the pro which was incredible)
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow nice i love it so far. i like the little anime notes in the ( like the sweatdrop) and i love the way its progressing keep it up
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have only read the prolouge but this story is far better than most that i have read. Keep up the awsome work.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And so it begins :), love the fight and the humour stuff. I shall await untitl the next chapter arrives.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey what a great start it seems that he finally sees what he should of seen when he was younger that he had someone there waiting for him.... Now that is out of the way I hope you write many chapters to this story and drop me a line when you update this story at JTB8834@aol.com
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz! in gods name continue !
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Upon your request I gave you a review, naturally I like this (ty for letting me read some of this in advance :P) you get a /salute a /cheer and a /applause and I can't wait for the rest of it, even though I know what will happen (again ty for giving me the rp format in advance)good luck to you my friend :)
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good start mate, I'm curious as to what you've got in stall for us :D
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ^_^
The part with Kiba admiring Naruto...Creepy, yet, oddly enough, it works into the story
You're a great author though some parts just seem rushed or don't really work well. Well anyway, if you want to talk to me and have me say what I think is wrong since I'm too lazy to post it, email me. Soyanaro and
Great work!
Nellysan
bahamut916@hotmail.com
The part with Kiba admiring Naruto...Creepy, yet, oddly enough, it works into the story
You're a great author though some parts just seem rushed or don't really work well. Well anyway, if you want to talk to me and have me say what I think is wrong since I'm too lazy to post it, email me. Soyanaro and
Great work!
Nellysan
bahamut916@hotmail.com
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So...email me also when the next chapter comes out okay?
Thank you muches
Nellysan
Thank you muches
Nellysan