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this deserves an update! can't wait to read more.

I don't know if you are still writing this story, but it would be cool if you were. It is really good and I would like to see it to the end

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Sigh.Love your mind.Don't forget us!!!!!!!!!!

WOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW...

And I was on a roll, not reading hetero lemons for five months D:

[I only desire yaoi...]

amazing work! simply awsome! please write more.

slightly disturbing, but not bad. i actually kind of like hinata and neji together, even though it is wrong. i guess its the same thing with liking sasuke and itachi together. anyway, i really liked this chapter. this whole story is... different but in a good way. of course, orochimaru is just plain disturbed, but that's okay. it works well with this story. and i can't wait to see what happens between sasuke and naruto. i hope something happens between them in the next chapter. whether its a talk or sex scene.

hope you update soon.

-inc

Congradulations on such use of a wicked plot device.Its simply decadent and wonderfully lush. It has a great variety of detail and is erotic as all hell.Its amazing.Oro is genius.It's vivid and very very compelling...belgian chocolates for the brain.Yes that yummy! The het was really hot!!!

Lovely work,Nar/Sas confession/weakness/source of strength.Really gorgeous.

You got my favorite characters, Neji and Hinata in a very dark situation, that I think is interesting, I'll keep and eye on this, see ya.