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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah man, that was sad. and i liked juyon... or whatever her name was. i haven't read that far into the manga, but when you TOLD us that she wasn't an original character and that you came up with a name for her, i didn't really care. i liked her and i liked how you portrayed her. anyway, the last scene with sasuke and naruto was... ah hell, i don't know. i just loved it though. i can't wait until you update. i need to see someone... anyone , rip orochimaru's throat out or decapitate the little fucker. then i'll be happy!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh, my apologies then. You did manage to flesh her out well then, as I know which one you are talking about. Even better than an OC.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i thought this fanfic would be good T_T but you snuck a mary sue in...freaking A they ruin everything ....
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting writing style.
I like your OC, very unlike most.
I like your OC, very unlike most.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! wow! wow!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fourteen is juuyon ur story is good disturbing bit good none the less
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn, i'm not really into the whole hetero thing... in reading or real life.... but that was hot. disturbing in some parts, but still hot. man, orochimaru is a sick bastard. and what was going on with the whole naruto and sasuke thing? i'm really curious to know where this story is going. so please update soon.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome! I hope there's more coming soon! Even though Shika was thinking of Genma...i still thought it was hot (Cause even tho Oro's a pedo, I still love him and can sometimes sympathise >.> *huggles Sasuke plushie* )
MOAR!! This story is incredibly relevant to my interests!
MOAR!! This story is incredibly relevant to my interests!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my , Shikamaru wow. If anyone could pull off the part of psycho pervert it's Orichimaru. Gah, he just screams sadist. Gah, poor Naruto I'ld have bit Sasuke's head off still. Sasuke is in a position to do something, perhaps release them. He could stand up to Orichimaru. Gah, was that Ino or Sakura in the first cell. Poor Hinata.
Gah, the title is so apt.
Gah, the title is so apt.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I had no time so I was just skimming through stories when this one caught my eye. Never expected it to draw me in like this though. I guess I love evil guys and there's too few Orochimaru stories out there. Please continue, I'm intrigued to know what 'worse' thing Orochimaru did to Sasuke.