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by KrickItat

schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this story cracked me up! Definitely a favorite. :) But I do have to say something, you had a lot of moments where the grammar gets really bad and it's hard to read almost whole paragraphs sometimes, so I'd suggest have a talk with your Beta, because they might not be pulling their weight. :) Just a friendly suggestion!

Again, awesome, awesome story! I LOVED the ending. And oh god I agree with that about guys wanting to do the butt thing, every guy I've been with has been the same way... it kinda gets tiring, having to turn 'em down. :( Fun to read about, but definitely not my cup of tea in the sack.

person Michael Beck
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great! There's only one thing missing: Tsunade showing Sakura the the issue of Shinobi Illustrated Swimsuit Issue with *her* on the cover, and saying

"This was just after I started using the rejuvenation technique, would you believe people thought that I was twenty instead of --"

"Instead of what?"

"Never mind that, Sakura. But I'm so proud of you!"
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was funny. That was also very hot. Ibiki, I can imagine him being into BDSM. OK on that thought...
person mirumototsubasa
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was a lot of fun. I love the comedy, and the sex. I only wish is was longer. *grin*

Have you thought of doing any more Kakashi/Sakura stuff? (I say this before I click on your name, because I am silly.)Also, since it was mentioned, my e-mail is the same as my username, just at that g mail place. ;D
person clandestine
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous... so amazingly funny. You are an awesome writer...
person cat
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! That was so yummy!
NARUTO:*sigh* I wanna be smacked on the ass! *pout*
It can be arranged......
person snowecat
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty funny actually. Never saw Kakashi in that particular light though. Not to say it's not possible. Sai licking the pages was a hoot. Did Sakura get paid for her poses I wonder? This is a story you should read. While not Kakashi/Sakura, it is very entertaining. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2800557/1/ The title is: Icha Icha Takutikusu Makeout Tactics I'll be looking forward to anything else you've posted.
person Aoekae
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it. it was pretty hilarious, and i liked how your wrote kakashi when he was severely pissed off.
person LDE
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply fantastic work, finally Kakashi as a Dom figure! bless you for it. theres so little of him like that (unless it yaoi, not my thing, not with him at least:P), so it was refreshing to get a taste of what I like. please keep writing, and know I will keep reading! if you ever get the urge to do a darker Kaka/Saka fic, I will be in my glory and bookmark it for future re-reading...lol.
person lulie
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this story! The hints toward Ibiki and Sakura, it would so cool if you made a story about those two! Again I just love it sooo much!