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by KrickItat

schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful and fun ficlet. Thank you so much for for writing it and for starting the hetero fanfiction discussion.
person jennjennr
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me again, thanks for clearing up about the mag, it answered all my questions and made the story... flow better.

...Oh my buhahahahha!! I loved it... I want to be punished by Kakashi! Mou! Geez I loved that scene! You have no idea, ooh the idea of Kakashi... ugh what a sex god, so dominating... makes me want to purr... Damn lucky Sakura I'd say.

I loved the humor! Haha I could so see Kakashi knocking men over like corkboard, it was so easy to picture, and the whole him running around frantically-obessivly attacking anyone who had an SI was so like him... well to me it was anyway... Poor Genma, he never catched a break does he? Oh well I loved the irony of Kakashi's 'phyco' episode happening after the fact that he had been running around totally ignored it in his single minded prusuit of his Icha Icha, great and so like him.

Ooh another interesting tid-bit was the fact that it was Sakura's and Kakashi's first time together, obviously there was an inckling of somthing because holy hell they sparked fire when they were together. And well he was soooo ferocious about bringing about an end to the SI editions' life, and punishing Sakura... and well that for sure was not a fatherly notion... I just loved it!

Gosh I love this story, I want it to continue, but I really can't see anywhere it could go other than more smutty dom scenes with Kaka and Saku... though that is always a good idea... Anyway thanks so much for writing this awesome fic, and well setting me to giggling and panting at the images it provided. Sorry for the um absentee review... heh heh.

-Love Jenn
person Zpan Sven
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls out of chair laughing hysterically* I love it! So funny! too bad Itachi wasn't around, I'd have loved to seen Sasuke's face if her had made a pass at her...

You tempt me to write my own version, with Ibiki as the male lead ;) I wuv my Ibiki-kun!
person Hillary (Ryokomaru)
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow i totally love this
person beliefinkakashi
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was kind of intense... lol... Sakura probably learned her leason of posin' for that magazine...
I think Kakashi losts his marbles in this, he totally went wakoots...
Great fic...
Cant wait for the next one.
person Silent Pluto
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rofl damn that was some good stuff!
I was laughing my ass all the way to
the smut part, then after that ^_^
hehehe
It was a great story!
kudos!
person Weeble
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the most original fics I have ever read and I loved it. Kudos to you! =)
person Jessica
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Illustrations of you was awesome! It was one of the funniest things I've ever read, and the sex scene was one of the hottest ever. I've always been a sucker for maledom though (No pun intended). Can't wait to read your next one!
person RadgarEleding
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seemed like an abrupt and unexpected way of getting to the sex scene, but nevertheless, an overall great story. Kakashi is my fav. character in the anime xD.
person Kay-san
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved it! The whole Kakashi bulldozing people over? Yeah, all those images had me laughing my ass off. There wasn't a particular part of the lemon that I liked better than the rest. I just love a good lemon when it's got Kakashi and older Sakura. Oh, and the whole 'dated Ibiki' bit was fun. In fact, I liked their interaction so much, I wouldn't mind seeing a story about their relationship!

So, bottom line, wonderful and fun story and I hope to see more from you soon! Hugs & Kisses!