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by KrickItat

person Fox
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG GREAT START!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN KAKASHI SEES HER HAHAHAHAHA POOR SAKURA ahahaha
person Akemi
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is hilarious, i seriously hope you update soon!
person hplotrnerd@yahoo
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like the concept, a little rough in the beg. but love it so far and I am looking forward to more soon!!
person jennjennr
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Hello darling, this was absolutly wonderful. I loved the small everyday things that were so damn humorous. Poor Sakura just reading about her shoot made me cold... that and I haven't fully figured out how to run the heating in this apartment... but still burr. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to her pictures. Now a question, this magizine, is it published out of Konoha? Like Icha Icha? or is this like a nija world wide publication? Because it would sure be funny to see men from other parts of the world (ie. like Suna) show up and recongize her. Just a thought... I loved the irony in this, she wasn't perfect and it was ackward for her, but in a way she is the typical, and perfect woman, I love that. And coming from someone who is totally Vanilla, I can say what a weird and horrible and scary and wonderful experience it would be. Thanks so much for writing this and please update as soon as you are able.
person Taylor
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny story, keep it going, it's well written and I'd love to see more.
person akasha
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i review enough stories that i find myself running out of colorful words and descriptive phrases to use.... let's just say that i'm diggin' the story and i can't wait for an update!!
person Sassy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story screams yum all over.
I have a feeling it's going to be a blast XD
Can't wait for the update!