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for Girls love Boys, Boys love Ramen

by exusmandragon

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Sexy.

...And All While Naruto *That Idiot* Was Asleep. *Sigh* Why Am I Not Surprised??

Poor Hinata!

Let's See What Happens! =)
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When's chapter 2 coming out??!?!
person Adam
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice can't wait for next one
person fmanerd50
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter
person Kute koyori >=9
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~.^ not bad! tsk tsk tsk hinata! You're so NAUGHTY!!! (cant say i wouldn't have done the same thing xD)
person Uberman
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering is this story going to have Naruto find out Hinata likes him
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. Keep up the good work.
person Anonymous
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been approved by anonymous.

Even so your writing could improve, there were some grammatical mistakes as well some style issues. Other than that it was decent piece of a writing and definately a juicy piece of smut.

Don't be afriad to overclock detail.
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz! continue its getting 2 good but i hope u hav naruto be a smarter dude cuz only a moron can sleep through dat
person nim istar
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a good story but i wonder how old they are suppost to be, pre or post time skip. cant wait for the next chapter.