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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This ending left me speechless. I mean what.. how... everyones just cool with it? What? Who? Geh!
Kabuto rapes Naruto. Then gets his brother as a reward? I don't.. how is this ok?
What. The. Fuck?
`ø_ø`
I just don't understand.
That said, the rest of your story was well written and very much reminded me of traditional Chinese folklore. The Helen of Troy element gave it a nice epic quality. But the ending...? I meah huh? I'm sorry, its an otherwise great story, but chapter 8 made no goddamn sense. :(
Kabuto rapes Naruto. Then gets his brother as a reward? I don't.. how is this ok?
What. The. Fuck?
`ø_ø`
I just don't understand.
That said, the rest of your story was well written and very much reminded me of traditional Chinese folklore. The Helen of Troy element gave it a nice epic quality. But the ending...? I meah huh? I'm sorry, its an otherwise great story, but chapter 8 made no goddamn sense. :(
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick and tidy ending
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, this is sooo cool! i love fairy tales, and although i've never thought of anything in the naruto world that could fit, this does perfectly!
plz upd8 soon!
plz upd8 soon!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oops! didn't finish reading before i commented ... sorry! sigh, this was so romantic. itanaru declaring their love for one another WAFF supreme!
thanx 4 sharing!
thanx 4 sharing!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow so intense. I laughed when I heard King Sasuke.
Itachi fight you have to save Naruto!
Great story can't wait to read more.
=)
Itachi fight you have to save Naruto!
Great story can't wait to read more.
=)
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY would you end it there? WHY? ACK! I like this story. Good writing.
update!
update!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for a first timer it's s pretty good one, I could practically imagine Naruto doing that modified chicken dance, god it's hilarious! my fave pairing After SasuNaru and NejiNaru is ItaNaru so rock on and do your best!!!
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I hope Kabuto gets his ass kicked!
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO! Naruto! Great story.
update!!!
update!!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please send me an email when you update this story.