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for Hope's Desire

by KitsuneNoMari

person Memphis Atari
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you rectify Naruto's personality soon. for one this story is so far ooc its not even funny. what's the point of using characters if you're not even going to use them as they are? where's the challenge in that? Naruto is such a whimper here its entirely laughable. what happened to his courageous and loud ways?
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute. but that damn kabuto is getting on my nerves. anyway, looking foward to your next update.
person kati
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
youre story is so cool there really arn't enough itanaru fics out there that have nothing to do with abuse or sasuke ( not that i dont like sasunaru!! ;) ) So, yeah im really njoying this, update soon!! xx
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the story in one go. Wow, seems like things are getting antsy here. What's gonna happen! I hope Naruto doesn't get caught or worse, hurt. If Itachi's there then it shouldn't get too bad right? Damn Kabuto. Update soon ^_^
person chineseartist
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute! i was worried about you and i thought maybe you'd dropped the story, but i'm glad to see that you're still writing. i'll keep an eye out for your next update, and i really enjoyed chap 3!
person Tara
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The whole idea of it is intriging...very much so. There aren't enough Ita x Naru in the world, so I'm working on one myself! "Blood soaked Kisses"....I'm going to put the preview up in a bit so you can tell me what you think. (It's very short though...)

I hope you update soon!

ps: How did you do that face? (:Ip) ? Uhh...that's not it. Xp that's not it either :(

Ki`Tara
person sadistickiss
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*love* Itachi is awfully OOC, but it's okay *sniffles* because this fic is so god damned cute XP. It's incredibly different to any other ItaNaru fic I've read before, that's for certain. I like, I like ^^. I was wondering, did Naruto-nightingale know that he would be changing (he seemed pretty unsurprised that he was suddenly a human - and he seemed already used to being in a body of one)? And how is he able to speak? Ooooh tell me, tell me~!

I hope you're doing okay! Come back and upate soon *love love*! ^^
person Neyumi
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god; that's all what I can say right now. I loved the lemon scene, whole chapter and all. Just please, keep writing~!
person Hello
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure that this was your first lemon!?! Man, you're good. If it'll make you happier, I may have suffer a nosebleed. XD Update soon please.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By all means update when its possible for you to do! I love your plot and I am very curious to see where this is going. My heart has warmed up to ItaNaru alot! Kudos!