rate_review Reviews

You're very descriptive. I love the story so far because it has my favorite pairing. Neji/Naruto. A female Naruto to boot. What did Naruto mean when she said, "I just got lucky." Should we take it at face value? Or is there a deeper meaning to the phrase? Is "Nanako" really pregnant? Or was it actually just a chakra trick? Only if Nanako-san weren't so recluse than maybe she would finally be able to tell Neji what was really wrong. I'mm actually hoping that "Nanako" is really pregnant. I'd like to see a father-to-be-Neji in full "Mother Hen" mode. Would you believe a Hyuga can actually act like that? And then it'd be coo-inspiring when Naruto starts wadling along the house. It'd be kind of weird to explain it to Godaime-sama once they got back to Konoha. That's for sure. But hopefully all this pregnancy thing happens after the Sasuke-angst-spiel. It wouldn't be good for Mama-Naruto to be stressed!

Oh! I love your imagination because without I would have been deprived of this treasure people call a "fanfic."

Oh! Thank you for posting this! It's so refreshing seeing something new, and well put together I might add. I'll be searching avidly for your next chapter!

Ja,
SeveredWings

Aww, Naruto! I wonder what's going to happen further on. Such a sad time. :(

SAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. You know how to add tension, dont you. Great writing. Cant wait for more!

Noooooo! That is a bad cliffhanger! Too intence for reader's health. I won't be able to withstand and wonder about what will happpen next. I was caught from Chapter 1 and I couldn't let go, this story is flowing very well, and I'm actually excited what you come up with next! Thanks for starting this fic!

Nyan... That was perfect... so gentle and sexy and nice! I love the way you portray Neji... its very interesting even though I dont particularily care for him. THe mission and the flow of your words is seamless and helps me forget I am reading, not watching anime. It is really a pleasure to read such a story, nyan! Please update soon!

oooohhhhh.... sexy! poor Naruto... not knowing how to was so logical and such a terrible thing! IT was erotic...nyan! me likes!!! more please!!

*glomps* That was so insightful! Nyan! I loved it! I want a Neji husband...where do we find that???

Ok, chapter 4 was really powerful... nyan... very much so... and I wonder how you do it! I loved the vulnerability and the emotions behind Naruto as much as the sex between them. It was beautifully crafted nyan... I want to write like you when I grow up, nyan... but I fear that will not be possible... I love this! nyan! More!!!