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by aranel

schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAARrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are evil! Nyan! Pure, unadulterated evil!!!! How could you do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! An Uchiha cliffhanger!!! nnnnnnnnnnooooooooooo !!!!!!! Please update... I need to know what happens, oh god! please!!!!!!! the unknown is killing me!! please!! nayn!!!
person Hello
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's getting interesting. Uchiha is there... What's going to happen? Uh oh...
person Selow
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, this should be interesting. i wonder which uchiha was that...
meanwhile, you've got a piece of writing with class here. funny that the two so far most interesting naruto fics from the psychological point of view both deal with crossdressing/changing gender, respectively. and are totally different at the same time. yah, it's great to read such good work :)
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it:D I wasn't going to read it at first (I'm following too many stories as it is) but I decided to go ahead anyways and I'm so glad I did. I love this story. First of all it's not SasuNaru (which is just waaaaaaaaay overused), second it's NejiNaru (which is one of my favorites), and I actually love stories where Naruto pretends to be a woman using the sexy-no-jutsu (though I really haven't seen that many of them). The only thing that would make it better is if you made it an mpreg (because I love mpreg stories, at least I love the well-written ones). I've never actually seen a NejiNaru mpreg, it's always SasuNaru. Everything's always SasuNaru..... anyways I'm sure not interested in me whining about that. I think I've pretty much said everything I wanted to say, so I'll end with yet another I love your story and I can't wait for your next update which I'm hoping will come soon. Oh and I hope that you'll finish this story, there are so many stories I love that are being abandoned and it's starting to make me sad:'( So many good stories that will never have an ending, I hope yours won't be one of them
person koi
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are just not enough NejiNaru out there. So thanks for being a supporter. These two belong together and the more fics we get out there, the more GOOD fics, the better. I love the way this is so deliciously fucked, with Neji not sure if he wants Naruto or Nanako. I want to know who taught Neji how to get a girl off. I'm a little upset on Naruto's behalf. But, it's all cool. Because it's still a great fic. I am looking forward to sex and babies. Yes, babies. Because nothing would make this fic better than a nice slice of mpreg. Oh yeah.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more plz
person akume
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling Naruto would try something like this. Well, thanks for the new chapter it was wonderfully written. Until next time. Ja.
person Hello
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a little bit weird having Naruto disguise as a woman, but it's a well written story, hope you'll continue. :p
person Kandi
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. Marry me! This is all I ever wanted in a fic! Well..maybe not all. It WOULD be all if this were an mpreg maybe? (waggles eyebrows)

person Toni
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is great! Naruto is such a minx. And Neji's in denial. Like they both didn't enjoy that! I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I'll be following along.

Update soon?