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ah, finally, almost a month of wait.

Yay! There arent any laws specifying the 'wife' has to be female, no?

SOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#100 Woooooo!!!!

*Sorry couldn't help myself:)

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I hate this couple, I hate Sasuke-bashing, I hate reading about detailed heterosexual sex in fanfiction, and I, for the most part, dislike the extended use of Sexy no Jutsu, especially for pregancies.

But I absolutely love this story. Everything about it. Bless you for posting it. God bless you.

Of course your health and schooling always comes first; your life outside this always comes first, even in my eyes, which are by now clouded and biased with fangirlishness. But- I still must ask you to make sure that the rest of this story is put up and finished. When it happens, I don't care. A month from now? Fine. Two months? Fine. Four months? Fine. A year? Fine.

I just want to see it done so that I can marvel in it's full-form beauty, enjoying the way that it's grace and romance smooths over all my worries, and anxieties. The way it makes me numb in the best possible sense of the world, filling in what it coaxed me to disregard with wonder and life, until I can barely breathe, much less keep the smile off my face.

Okay? I don't care when it happens. I just want to see this story done. It makes me more happy than I believe can be healthy and I love it for that. I can't remember the last time that I've been so attached to a fanfiction, love one so much, so please.

Please.

I hate you...no, I love you...no, I hate you...argh, I don't know...I love you for your brilliant story and I hate you for leaving us with this evil, evil cliffhanger!!! No, really, you had me sitting at the edge of my chair, gripping the armrests so tightly I got cramps in my fingers and then...end of chapter! I cannot believe you did something so cruel ...^_^' Your story is so beautiful and sad and heartstopping and...oh my god so gooood!!! I know you're very busy and I won't pester you but know that I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

I think I have yet to tell you that this story is going to be one of the main reasons of my death XD!

-Damp *I'm just kidding!*

No update for a month? NOOOOOOOO!!!! :'( Your making me sad, though I do understand. I had to do a 6 day week once for my job, let me say I will never do it again. And I'm only a part-time worker, though my boss does enjoy stuffing an 8-hour workday into 4 hours. At least for some of us. But moving on:

Is Hiashi removing the seal? Neji seems to think that Hiashi's going to kill him but I find myself doubting that given his comments before. So would that mean he wants him to be a part of the Main Family and not the Branch? Would that make a difference with Takashi if they found out about him. I know that as a Branch member's child they'd put the seal on him, but if Neji's main, wouldn't they not? Though I'm guessing if he is doing that, removing the seal, with other comments, he likely is planning to arrange a marriage for Neji. And with his 'pure' comments, I'm thinking it would be with someone from within the clan. Someone needs to have a chat with him about inbreeding:) and the future detriments of not having any genetic variation.

I have to say, I'm surprised that Naruto didn't flip out on them when they hurt Takashi. Especially that he actually cried, given that that's something he doesn't do. But I guess he didn't/doesn't want to make a bad situation worse. Neji too.

I have a question. Who knows about the kyuubi? Obviously Neji doesn't, but it seems like Sakura does. Is there anyone else from their generation who knows?

And are we going to see Itachi and Sasuke again at some point? And the Akatsuki. I can imagine they'd pissed about the Kyuubi thing, though I could almost see them attempting to take both Naruto and Takashi and see if they could salvage the Kyuubi from the two of them. Though I will say I don't completely understand. I know Kyuubi is sentient and exists within Naruto and has personality and evilness and all that. But now he's partially within Takashi, or Takashi has a part of him? Is it just one tail's worth of his power or is Kyuubi someone split between them both? Or does Kyuubi not exist as a sentient being anymore, now just being power and it's split between Naruto and Takashi, with Naruto having the lion's share of it? And I hope I'm not bugging you asking so many questions.

I hope your job settles down soon. 6 days a week is harsh.

Wonderful chapter! Death to the council!! I loved the bit with the fox; was Takashi speaking demon?
Hiashi's finally removing Neji's curse seal! Yay! Hope to read more once you're back on a decent schedule.