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by aranel

person ML
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No. You cannot DO that! Just . . . gah! That was one of the most well placed cliffhangers I've ever seen. I . . . argh! I HATE you for it! (not really, but yeah. Ack!!!)
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sad to hear you won't be updating this much. i almost didn't read this because i didn't think i'd like the way things would progress. and even though what i thought might happen did happen, i liked it anyways. which suprised me. and now i can't wait for the next chapters. it really isn't fair. you're a really good writer and i hope you'll be able to update more than you expect.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my god their son is the cutest little thing. sad to hear we wont be getting updates for a while but as long as this fic isn't being abandoned i dont think we'll mind the wait. looking foward to the next update whenever that may be.

~Devious
person Mitsuko
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You continue to drag me further and further into this story....lol. Great chap as always, patiently awaiting the next!
person Damp
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, we all know that one day the whole ninja world will know, And yes, that's all fine and dandy...question is: WHEN will they know! And WHEN will Neji and Naruto be able to live freely? These questions are HAUNTING ME <.<.

-Damp *When will the madness be OVER!! >.<*
person bears24
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I promise to leave a more insightful review later on, but I just had to let you know.
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*tears up* that was so sweet. i eagerly look foward for the next update.
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I probably shouldn't be reviewing half asleep but I'm afraid by tomorrow I'd forget to come back and review. So please excuse me, because I am half asleep.

I'm surprised that Naruto and Neji would go that far. I kind of figured that they'd keep their relationship platonic just in case, but they're having loud sex and declaring their love for each other where anybody passing could hear. Hopefully if someone does hear it'll be someone who cares about them and Takashi and who won't rat them out.

As for the end, I hope so too Neji. It's just sad that he has to be so far from his son and Naruto. Though at least he was able to be named godfather. It gives him more of an in. I have to say, I found in the trials, I was almost rooting for Neji's clan to find out about Takashi. Except then they'd try to exploit him, I think, especially being Naruto's too. It's sad.

And my brain is just freezing up and I can't remember anything else I wanted to say. So I'm gonna say, woooo for the new chapter and I hope the next update is soon. And that Neji's little promise at the end comes through.
person emp78
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Neji and Naruto finally got together as themselves! For the first time being a true uke, Naruto didn't seem to have much pain. I guess he was just uber aroused. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Damp
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. What. The. Fuck. Just. Happened. I don't understand what happened just now. Please explain.

-Damp * o_. *