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by aranel

person Zigana
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi again? Is there no way to let Neji and Naruto raise there child together? The Hyuuga clan sometimes just absolutely sucks. Please update soon.
person LadyApollonia
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, please! Say you'll update soon! I knew it was coming, but that was wonderful! I sat and giggled for a few minutes after Naruto fainted. I love this. Neiji & Naruto are my FAVORITE pairing and sexy-no-jutsu is always awesome. This is so well-written too! Just love it!
person LadyApollonia
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I JUST now reviewed & magically got chapter 9 immediately after, but I think I hate you. NOOO!!!! Just tell me it's Itachi and not Sasuke. Either way, this is really bad. Dangit!!!! Please let everything be okay! Please let everything be okay! *repaeats mantra a lot*
person Kallie
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD. NOT AGAIN!! THOSE DAMN UCHIHA KEEP POPPING UP AND MESSING WITH MY NEJINARU HAPPINESS! URGE TO KILL RISING!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! You've updated! Wonderful wonderful!! I can't wait to see what happens next. You are truly talented, one of the best on this site. ^^
person mary
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok.....you have caught my interest......MORE PLEASE!!!! this is getting better and better!!!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my god... this is excellent writing at it's best. i eagerly look foward to your next update.
person emp78
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the part where Naruto would stand in front of the mirror, as well as poke his stomach. (Did that with my first also; was told couldn't have kids. LOL.) Which of the Uchihas is messing with Neji and Naruto? Have them kick his ass!
person akume
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! They're keeping the baby. Ano, I hope everything turns out alright for them. They so deserve some happiness. Maa, was that Itachi bothering Naruto-kun again? Anyway, thanks again for the quick update. Until next time. Ja.
person Bookworm51485
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, your welcome (I try to let any that I notice know. I did try to get the mods to switch their policy so instead of having to allow anonymous reviews, you'd instead have to disallow them if you felt it necessary but they decided to play it safe) and thank you for the new chapter:D I wasn't expecting one so soon, was quite excited when I saw it.

And now on to the review: is that Sasuke? Someone I don't see Itachi being the physical, not unless he had to be. And since there's a Sharingan, I'm going to assume that that was Sasuke. Now I've found I'm very curious what's going to happen next. And what's going to happen to their mission. With Sasuke there, unless he chooses to just back off and leave them alone, if they have to fight I can't see how they'd maintain their cover within the village. I imagine that any fight with Sasuke would end up being a major landscape destroying battle if he was set on making things difficult. Or finding answers I guess, since he seemed to be asking Naruto something when Neji came.

And from the thought on what would happen to the mission, I start wondering what would happen if they're forced to end the mission and ordered to come home while Naruto's still pregnant? Would they run? Would they go home and hope for the best? Hmmmm..... this whole chapter just brought up so many questions for me. And it was quite sad. They've finally found love with each other, two people who've had a major deficit of it in their lives but they can't be together. It makes you almost wish that somehow the Hyuuga clan would accept Naruto, but for people so obsessed with image and power and status, unless the search into Naruto's past finds a connection to something powerful and prestigious, I'm disappointed to say that they'd likely have quite a fight on their hands.

I swear, every chapter you post just builds more anticipation for me. I want to see if I'm right and it is Sasuke and what's going to happen. Does he know it's Naruto? And if he does figure that's it's Naruto, what would his reaction to situation be if there is no fight? Or will his reaction be to choose to fight? Or will he just fight anyways? What happened to Neji at the end? What will Naruto do? Too many questions. I hope your next update also comes quickly:)