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for Fox eat Dog

by DirtyDiana

schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah Kakashi dropped his pants down ... wow and naruto didn't make a fuse ...
hahah no porn for Kaka ^__^
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow Ino hitting on Kakashi, and then naruto walking around naked ... nice lol
person Reyn
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Naruto get off me or I'll take back what I said and piss in your ramen."

LMAO!!! XDDDDDD
person BloodyA
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, this story is so amazingly good I don't know what to do with myself. I'm completely serious here. LOL I've never read this kind of story that deals with these issues between Kakashi and Naruto like you've written here. So good that I'm squirming in my seat for more. Lovely story, thanks for sharing! :D
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Secret? What secret? Did I miss something here? *sits and ponders what on earth you're talking about*

Wonderful update. ^_^ Kakashi is being a real tight ass about this whole situation, really if it gets any tighter he's gonna start squeaking when he walks. ^_^ I look forward to the next update. Ja Ne.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wuhu.. I love this one. :))
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! for a backrub that was both cute and hot...oooh, I'm seeing foreshadowing for the future!!! A very sombre chapter, but then again, i suppose that's what sustaining multiple injuries can do to a person. Short side story eh? lol
Very nice chapter, onto the next one!!!
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww that hug was so awkward its unbelieveable, and at the same time I just love Kakashi for putting up with it and defrosting himself a while. Yeah, the conversation was a little eratic and I couldn't really get into it as much as previous chapters, but the love is still there!! ...How long did you say it would be before we got some Kaka/Naru lovins? lol. Nice chapter! Update soon!
person lunajen
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Angelcry
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!.... Just kidding baby >.> I hate you!!!!!!!!

No smut again??? Why must you torture me so? *sniffles* Although fluffly fangirl oriented hug was a nice touch...But damn I was practically on a squealing brink when Kakashi 'let Naruto on a secret' >( The squealing WOULD take place if he actually did more than tell his favorite color...Although blue is my favorite XD
Hee hee quick writing you procrastinator. I should actually get back to my own fic... ;___; Need time and inspiration.