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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god i love this fic! glad they got to talk it out for a bit. i look foward to your next update whenever that maybe.
“He put peroxide in Sasuke's shampoo bottle turning his hair blond when he called Iruka a 'useless ninja'.” LOL! what i would pay to see that!
“He put peroxide in Sasuke's shampoo bottle turning his hair blond when he called Iruka a 'useless ninja'.” LOL! what i would pay to see that!
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this. You actually write quite well, the only problem is with your tenses, you switch between present and past. It's easy to do, I still do it after writing for 10 years. (Please don't be mad at me for saying this??!!) I love this story, and Kakashi, Naruto especially (I have one that includes Sasuke as well) But I can't wait for Kakashi to jump Naruto's ass, or the other way around. If I may be so bold, can they switch in the relationship????
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was nice. The pace of the entire story seems to be moving on rather realistically. I really like Naruto and Kakashi's interaction. They can be a pretty hot couple when they want.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so sweet. Your story is really funny, it's like Kakashi is at war with himself. I love it! Hopefully Naruto will win the war for him. Great writing!
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. I've never been thrown into so many fits of giggles in such a short period of time in my life. I can't wait for more. ^^
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord. The scene where Naruto's junk is swaying to and fro in front of Kakashi's face is priceless! This is the funniest fanfic I've read in a while. I'm looking forward to the next update!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stunning. Your writing is vivid and catches my attention. And the yaoi does NOT hurt. Gotta go change my panties XD While I'm doing that you wanna throw a review my way on my buddingfic? <3 Someone with your obvious experience may be able to help
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful! I actually haven't seen that many NaruKaka out there and I have to admit this is probably the best one. [grins] Please continue [nod nod] It'd be a shame if this were to simply disappear. The Kakashi b-day was very cute and just makes you want shake Kakashi and go "wake up! You like Naruto!" ^_^ I look forward to your update and I am deffiantely keeping an out for is story now.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon......I like unusual pairings like this one and they are hard to find when good. I would spend time offering more praise and help but I've burnt my hand. Bah. Just keep it up.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far. After all one can never get too much KakaNaru. :D If you are still looking for a beta for this story I would be more than happy to do it. My Email is fairy_niamh@hotmail.com. Keep up the good work and iggy the subbies who give you nothing but hate. Ja Ne.