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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did a good job with this. It's definitely an interesting and original plot. Some of it was a little unrealistic (interaction and reaction wise) but it was still a fun read.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I really liked your story. You managed to write it so that every part of the story seemed to take the story forward, it never got boring or something like that.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, the story was sweet and well written, my hat goes off to you and one day i wish to write some thing of this calibre! Thank you for the entertainment XD x x
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
schedule
January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wheee~!
I loved this story babe
totally sweet and sexy
and not too much in the angst department
a wonderful mixture of tastes and textures if I do say so myself
can't wait to read more of your stories~~!
^o^
I loved this story babe
totally sweet and sexy
and not too much in the angst department
a wonderful mixture of tastes and textures if I do say so myself
can't wait to read more of your stories~~!
^o^
schedule
December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderfully hysterical. Oh, I couldn't stop laughing at it all. It was also very well written, and I hope your talent never ends.
schedule
December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, did you ever write the story titled Dost thou Know? you have it in extras under chapter 13. it looked promising.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nonsensical.GOD I LOVE THAT WORD...OH,AND THE STORY WAS GOO TOO
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just 3 words;
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! nice job!! XD
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! nice job!! XD
schedule
July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah. and they live happily ever after...forever. can't get much better then that.