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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Fourthiv
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The anticipation I have for the conclution of this story is so freaking intense! Ahh! I really do love this story.
person outlander_girl
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A FEW DAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TT_TT i just about die from joy at a new chapter and then you say that your going to make me wait again?????!!!!!!!!!! *dies from heartache*....*sniffs*.....*cries* but no, seriously, i LOVE this story and i've been looking twice every day to make sure i didn't miss it and i cant wait for an update!!!!! i'm addicted!!!!!
person Dace
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itai.....I just fell of my computer chair.... I was totally sitting on the edge of my chair when i read the last line, and noticed that it was the last line, that I kinda looked at your message not comprehending, and needless to say, dace has no balance.....

PLEASE, PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! kneels *puppy eyes* .... THAT IS SUCH AN EVIL CLIFFY! (can kitties have puppy eyes? eh?)
person Starry
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you must update quickly~! I can't wait to see the ending!
person redtatsu
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what in the world will happen... TELL ME!!!
person Chikako-Chan
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-squeals- Loved it. <333

What's gonna happen next? -paws at screen and waits eagerly- >>;

Fantastic job! :3
person Sunset Serenity
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read Ch. 9 earlier. Just wanted to tell you that the fighting scene was really good, actions were adequately descriptive and nicely interweaved with the characters’ thoughts. You used details well. Minor details such as how you mentioned Orochimaru’s jealousy of Sasuke’s Sharingan just makes your story so much more real. I also like how you explained the ancient curse and others.
person Sunset Serenity
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was ripe and sweet and refreshing. Say how Sasuke said Naruto’s name, how Naruto reacted to it, the connection and the bracelet, all so beautifully put together. It was a joy reading it. Have been super busy lately and your story was a real treat. Thank you so much.

Hope you have a wonderful holiday and a happy new year!
person chrry_pnk
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL!!!! Where's the next button! I can't see it!!!! OH MY! there is non..... "sweatdrop" hehehe sorry...

Oh by the way LOVED you're story...... update.... pls... ^_^
person Lavinia
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OY! where is the next chap lazing? It had better get it's arse over here, or I'll come and get it!
I've been waiting patiently for sooooooooo long, but I'm at my wits end!
hurry the fuck up, and continue your awesome story, and stop the hell torturing me by making me wait!