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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person narufan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CAP. it's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute, love it soooooooooo much, *blush* *he he he*
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Minister: If anyone knows a reason why these two should not be wed, speak now or forever hold your peace.
The door at the back creaked open just then, and everyone turned to see Kazahaya come through the door and walk halfway up the walkway to the exact middle of the room.
Kazahaya: Sakura-san, I am sorry about this, but you can't marry Sasuke, fore he has been engaged to someone for the last 15 years.
Sakura: Who?
Kazahaya dropped the illusion.
Naruto: Me. And I came here to retrieve him.
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really anxious to see what happens next, when will Sasuke realise his Naruto is really alive, I guess I will have to wait hehe. Excellent job.

WAFF stands for warm and fuzzy feelings :)
person PyroNeko
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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I just love drunk Susuke & what does he decide?

I want more NOW, please =]
person Jen Shot
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does Naruto kick more ass than before?
YES
Does Kakashi rock hard core? *rabid Kakashi-stalker*
YES
Was that one of the best/sexiest lemons I've ever read?
YES
Did I drown in my own drool?
YES
Am I now waiting for the next chapter at the edge of my grave?
YES
Kami-sama. ROCKS.
- Jen
person mike~
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was fabulous!

thx for writing the drunken uchiha and sexy naruto!

i can't believe sasuke has yet to officially say something about the wedding! is he waiting for naruto to make the first move? is he respecting naruto's choice of concealing his identity, and so not saying anything about it? or is it that he's afriad that if he says anything, this 'dream', or his hope that naruto is alive would be dashed to pieces?

im really looking foward to a waff ending! i mean, after all that naruto and sasuke's been through, i can't wait until they wake up in the morning, and declare eternal love ! (lol, im sure your ending wont be as corney as what i said...)

newaz, thx for writing this, and update soon!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very glad Orochimaru will get he had coming for him after so long! Oh yeah!
I found this chappie to be very sensual and I rather like Naruto's methodology
of cleansing Sasuke of that snake! I loved this update =)
person dragonboy
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the 5th Hokage figured who the lord was. Is Sasuke going to change his mind, and leave the bitch at the altar, or is Naruto going to gate crach the wedding, and remove the henge? But hey your the author, and this story ROCKS LIKE HELL!
Well keep up the good work and update soon. Tanks!
person ladygizarme
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! the lemon was oh so yummy but it made me cry too, out of happiness! (i'm pregnant and emotional what can i say; i was already a crier to begin with!) naruto got to be with sasuke as himself! and sasuke's holding the bracelet! aaah what will his reaction in the morning be i wonder? how much will his drunkenness affect his memory and belief in what happened.. i'm glad you're making this WAFF cuz as much as i enjoy angst, it's nice to have happy stuff with them too, ne?! ^_____^
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I like the twist you gave the story and I would like to see it end too! I like your writing style and this captured my attention nearly right away! Keep up the good work!