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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Yukino
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals like a rabid fan girl* I loved it!!!!! It was a kinda short lemon, without much detail, but the stuff you
did put in was great!!! Aaah! Poor Naruto!! Why's he crying? Doesn't he want Sasuke to know who he is? Ok now I
need to read the next chapter, because you are a sadistic wrench that keeps giving us those cliffhangers that we
all hate to love. *Sigh* You're so cruel! LOL, please update as soon as you can. I shall be waiting!!
person Anna (and Yura)
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say I'm impresed!
Even if it was Anna the one that started reading your story, you quickly got me hooked as well.
Anyway, we're both WAFF freaks, so we don't mind at all.
Ja ne!
yura and Anna
person Aidis
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o What will happen? Nobody knows! Update soon neh?
-Aidis
person hanyou-elf
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! they did it! i'm so happy. and poor naruto. what's he going to do? it was beautiful. i loved that naruto was so willing to give himself to sasuke, no matter what. ohs, i know it's going to be sasunaru, but the wait is wonderful. i love the anticipation for the next chapter, and really hope it comes before too long. and aww moment: the braclet. very nice honey, very nice. i love your story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, happily looking forward to a delicious moment and a chance to see something delcious and fun. i hope the next lemon you write will be more... risque?

ahs... the decision. he decides to be naruto's husband and take off, leaving a weeping sakura to be tended to by the konoha citizens who completely feel nothing towards her because of her insistent attitude and belief that she would have sasuke-kun. yay! *ahem*

i look forward to the next excellent update you produce, though i'm a tad disappointed we couldn't get the twenty pages... *sarcastic sigh* ah well... nine is good enough!

~hanyou-elf
person hanyou-elf
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! they did it! i'm so happy. and poor naruto. what's he going to do? it was beautiful. i loved that naruto was so willing to give himself to sasuke, no matter what. ohs, i know it's going to be sasunaru, but the wait is wonderful. i love the anticipation for the next chapter, and really hope it comes before too long. and aww moment: the braclet. very nice honey, very nice. i love your story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, happily looking forward to a delicious moment and a chance to see something delcious and fun. i hope the next lemon you write will be more... risque?

ahs... the decision. he decides to be naruto's husband and take off, leaving a weeping sakura to be tended to by the konoha citizens who completely feel nothing towards her because of her insistent attitude and belief that she would have sasuke-kun. yay! *ahem*

i look forward to the next excellent update you produce, though i'm a tad disappointed we couldn't get the twenty pages... *sarcastic sigh* ah well... nine is good enough!

~hanyou-elf
person mgp
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I wasn't paying attention, but why does Naruto never tell Sasuke the truth about him. The sex is crap... because Sasuke was drunk, and he doesn't know that Naruto's even alive! What a way to get pregnant, Naruto. Girls turn their heads, call him skank. Naruto's so underhanded... meh, maybe because I like Naruto cute and not a killer, this one turns me off.
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Will Sasuke even remember that he had sex with Nartuo/Kazahaya in the morning or…Oh man he’s going to think it’s a dream at first isn’t he and then he’ll turn over and see Naruto there and…or maybe he’ll think it’s a dream and turn over and Naruto won’t be there but he’ll realize that he could at least have some semblance of happiness with Kazahaya as opposed to Sakura? Or maybe he’ll think that he can only ever truly love Naruto and so he turns down both Sakura and Kazahaya but then Sasuke finds (in some way or other) the bracelet that he gave Naruto when they were younger and he realizes that Kazahaya is Naruto and confronts him from there?! OMG I just really got carried away didn’t I? I’m sorry; I guess I just got a little too excited for my own good. I suppose it stems from this problem I have that my favorite fics never seem to get finished and so I’m constantly left hanging.

Anyway though, it was a great chapter and as always I look forward to the next chapter. Oh and I know I’m most likely going to sound like an idiot for this, but could you please remind me what exactly WAFF means? I know I should know these things and I have a general idea but, humor me. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.



Dryad1789@hotmail.com
person Carla
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This last chapter is awesome! Incredible! The *healing* so arousing! Wow! Beautiful! I love it! Please update soon as am dying to see that lemon. Well, read that lemon. That was a really great chapter.

Carla
person Hello
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They're closer to being together. Such an emotional yet happy thing. :) LOVE the update.
person XZanayu
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's so wonderful!! I wondering how Sasuke will react in the morning when he wakes up? Hurry with the next chapter!!!