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Nergh! Die Snake Bastard! How dare you interrupt the makings of a good smut scene! DIEDIEDIE!

Ahem. Now that you know my feelings on the subject of the Snake Bastard...

Very, very, very nice. Original plot which is always a plus, and it's well written too. If when you update you could email me at loddy_rox@hotmail.com I'm love you forever.

That was a interesting chapter, thanks. That pink haired bitch is always trying to get in the way, i thought she's backed off by now. ( stubborn daluded little girl). She can't have the wedding tomorrow, the cow! Selfish as every right? Does any one else agree with me?
Next chapter will be 20 pages you say? I'll enjoy that.
Will Naruto reveal himself to Sasuke?

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!! He's not really gonna eat him is he? 'Cuase that would probably kill ANY attraction that
Sasuke has for him. Yosh!! *Dances, singing:* Next chapter is a lemon, next chapter is a lemon. Yay!!! Oo! When is
Naruto gonna show himself? During the sex? Oh gosh, talk about ackward. Ah ha ha!! That would be hallarious! But it
would so kill the sex. Hehe, please update soon!! That cliff-hanger was horrible, especially after you told us that
there's smut in the next chapter!

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OMG that was hot, i hope you get to update soon this fic is in my favourites list.

one word...
intense

(but in a good way,
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon)

Wonderful chapter :D

hey i'm back. love the story, sorry i havn't been here to read and stuff. well i am now, ya like before love da story and all. you are soooooooooooo cool ya!! \(^o^)/ ya ya ya

Damn it !!!
That was such a hot tease!!
Now I'm gonna have to impatiently wait for you to update again!!!
Tasty job!!!!

You're a damn tease just when it got good you stoped. Bring on the NaruSasu. By the way graet chappie. Remember sasUke.

Can I start calling you Kami-sama?
Seriously.
I go through like... 50 fanfictions a day to try and find the ones worth marking and watching and keeping up with...
And I find maybe 1 or 2 a week.
If I'm lucky.
Your's caught me immediately. I pounced and sat and read and damn near killed my dad any time he tried to get me to help out in cleaning the house.
I was almost late for work 'cause I wouldn't leave the computer until I had finished Chapter nine.
I have a friend who I've simply told her "It's friggen AWESOME" but she has this stupid thing where she only reads completed fanfictions... so I've gotta notify her about when it's done.
But I love it.
Seriously.
I do.
100%.
Heart, body and soul.
That may be the sugar talking... we don't know.
But I would very much like to be put on a alert list!
I think I read in one of the chapters that you had one...
It was over 8 hours ago that I read it...
But yes.
If you've got one... my email is squishy_ish@hotmail.com
Please and Thank you and by god keep up the good work!!
- Jen Shot