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I've been meaning to read this fic for quite a while now, but I just haven't had the time. I knew I'd like it because I positively love your writing style and plot lines, and now that I have read it, it was absolutely fantastic! I love the fact that you made Naruto smart and strong, it thoroughly makes him sexier that Sasuke. I also don’t mind that Sasuke has been OOC because the way you set up the storyline, it would be weird if he wasn’t. I do have to admit that it’s strange that he would open up to Kazahaya/Naruto so easily, but then again everyone has that one person that they are able to open up to no matter the situation.

I’m curious to know who in fact had seen Naruto without his disguise. If it was Sasuke then it would explain why he would call Kazahaya his old pet name for Naruto. However on the other hand, with the way Sasuke has been OOC, I would think that he would have confronted Kazahaya about it. Oh well, I suppose I’ll just have to wait for the answers in the following chapters. To wrap things up though, I think this fic is original and definitely worth continuing. I look forward to your next updates. My best wishes for you and your writing.

P.S. In regards to which stories I would like to be updated about, just throw me in for all of them, new ones included. I would particularly like to be notified for updates concerning “Here’s to the Fox” *hint, hint* as well as this one. I would greatly appreciate it and I also would like to offer my condolences in regards to your leg. I have actually bruised a bone and I can certainly attest to how much it hurts.



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mmmm yes, very nice way to get rid of sasu's seal and turn him on at once lol, that was hot.. can't wait for the lemon next time! oh and i just hafta say that it was endearing to me the way naruto spoke to anko before and after removing her seal *happy sigh*

Bloody Hell! Evil, evil cliffie. Loved this.

you made a typo in the first part of the story. itacha only takes a second to cast tsukiyomi , but it makes the user traped in it feel pan for an indefinate amoutn of hours decided on by the caster. the longes someons be under it was 72 HOURS (which was only 1 second in the real world) we dont know if the most itachi can make it last is 72 hours... since he controls time in the plane he creates he may be able to make it last longer we're not sure ...sorry im going on about the jutsu im a total Itachi freak so i waned to make sure i told you that you made a mistaake. anyway i love this story I look for an update every 2 days of so. i love how you wrote the characters and your style is very good! anyway keep up the good work!!! Sakura is a total bitch (as she should be)

- Mayday

ps please make itachi appear in the story at least once!!!please (insert pathetic puppy dog eyes)

Aw, that bastard ruined all the fun for them. Poor Sasuke will surely receive a headache after this, major one!!!

I love the story so far, the way you have written Sakura is just a little 2 dimensional for my taste but, it works in the "I'm a selfish bitch, who doesn't care about anyone's happiness but my own" sort of way. I can't wait to read more

But, but but... I wanted Naurto to eat Sasuke not Orochimaru :( /wink Sasuke just needs to come out and tell that pink headed fluff that he wants the demon lord and not her!!

Oh, almost forgot, please more smut (of the NaruSasuNaru type) thank you

Yay!! Finally a lemon will be coming soon. As long as its between Naru/Sasu-chan. And you would want to mess up a great chapter with the pink bitch attaching herself to Sasuke about getting married and that idiot Jiraya agreeing. If anyone should get married it should be Naru/Sasuke. But, other than that setback, this chapter was great!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

omg! that was totally cool!

im trying my best to not get paranoic for the next chapter :P plz update the next as quickly as possible ;_; love u! i love ur fic! its really great!