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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The action was awesome. Techniques and everything. Loved the little lemony scene. update soon.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mewl??? *niff* when are they finaly getting together... that pink haired thingie is driving me nuts by getting to marry sasuke.. mewl.. *niff*
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! yay, he's finally free!!!! and i can't wait for the bachelor party!!!! and FINALLY some action (no offense) ! Damnit Sasuke, just do Kazahaya already!!!!! who cares about sakura??? yes, i'm uber excited and i love your story, it's uber shibby.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so good!!!! Especially the part about eating him alive.
I got a sugestion for the True Identity scene. Well, actually, 2 sugestions. 1. He drags sasuke away from everyone else and dispells the illusion
in private then explains that he was taken by the kitsunes or 2. He shows up a half hour late to the party with the spell already disolved and everyone freaks out.
I would also like to sugest that a peace treaty and alliance be formed between Konohagakure and the Kitsune village. That way, some kitsunes can become ANBU or help in the hospital. Also this way, Sasuke can go to the kitsune village legally, and maybe even on Tsunade's orders. Those are just my thoughts, use them if you want.
I got a sugestion for the True Identity scene. Well, actually, 2 sugestions. 1. He drags sasuke away from everyone else and dispells the illusion
in private then explains that he was taken by the kitsunes or 2. He shows up a half hour late to the party with the spell already disolved and everyone freaks out.
I would also like to sugest that a peace treaty and alliance be formed between Konohagakure and the Kitsune village. That way, some kitsunes can become ANBU or help in the hospital. Also this way, Sasuke can go to the kitsune village legally, and maybe even on Tsunade's orders. Those are just my thoughts, use them if you want.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, damn the evil cliffe! and when in the hell is sasuke gonna find out that "kazahaya" is naruto?! damn, i'm getting an anxious now. i really want to read the next chapter! i love this story. and i can't wait for the sex... really can't wait for that. anyway, i hope you update soon. really really soon.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was unexpected. I guess its only fair to say...."KICK HIS CHILD MOLESTING SNAKE ASS NARUTO!!" That snakey-son-of-a-beast, not only ruined good NaruxSasu playtime, he ruined Naruto's Sasuke gift! Oh, its on like Donkey Kong! -pouts- I hope he gets what's coming to him...all that and more...yet....I'm all a giggle to read the next chapter!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are the God(dess?) of writing!! and i am soooooooooooo in love with these stories of yours!!! plz keep it up!!!
-your greatest fan =^-^=
-your greatest fan =^-^=
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
khhhhh! where is the 10th chappie hiding? You ought to upload it, or... or... I'll find you and do nasty things to you with a spoon! YEAH! tremble in fear, you upload-postponing-author!
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, I really like it.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhhhhhhhh!!!!
You're so great!!!
I really, really, really, really like your story!
You're so great!!!
I really, really, really, really like your story!