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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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YAY HE WILL MARRY SASUKE. Does he remember i wonder?
YAY HE WILL MARRY SASUKE. Does he remember i wonder?
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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NO! NOT SAKURA ANYONE BUT SAKURA!!! ....well most anyone. not orochimaru anyways, at least not willingly. Poor Naruto. AH! I must read the next chapter.
NO! NOT SAKURA ANYONE BUT SAKURA!!! ....well most anyone. not orochimaru anyways, at least not willingly. Poor Naruto. AH! I must read the next chapter.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn i have to go to work! I should call out so i can read.....but i can't *whimpers*
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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i can not believe he let him self fall off the cliff like that. now that is love.
i can not believe he let him self fall off the cliff like that. now that is love.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9:
i love the fact that you had kakashi and iruka...my favorite pairing.
i love the fact that you had kakashi and iruka...my favorite pairing.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! SO GOOD! I read this thing in one go and man, it was worth it! I LOVED the ending. So sweet and perfect!
AMAZING JOB!!!!
AMAZING JOB!!!!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, this story is glorious! Glo-ri-ous! Your Naruto is so badass! I thank you for finally getting it right that Naruto is all man, possessive as all hell, a power house, and I love his logic as well. HAHAHA I mean, if Naruto came clean to Sasuke in the beginning. Sasuke would have been like "hell yeah, baby!" and would have left the very first chapter and gotten married but Naruto's guilt trip and the fact he wouldn't let go of Sasuke made him do it the hard way. It was SO funny that I cracked up the whole day cause Naruto really has weird ass logic like that! I loved how his father throughout was like “WTF?!” cause he thinks like the rest of us. I felt he represented that. Great job. I just love it.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story line!!! once i started reading, i couldn't stop...^.^
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was rereading this and I still love it but I have a question. What made you choose the term yomeiri? While it apparently does mean marriage it's an obscure (and probably rarely used) term. In my Japanese studies Kekkon means marriage while kekkonshiki means marriage ceremony or wedding. I'm a Japanese major and this story is the first time I've run accross the term yomeiri. So I'm sorta curious about it. Did you grow up speaking Japanese?
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the concept of your story; very original! I like how you meld each character to make them your own, but kept their authenticity intact...I think towards the end you tried to tie up ~too~ many loose ends, but it was still entertaining to read...the only thing that truly bothered me was your overuse of the word "defection"...but I really loved watching the story unfold and relive all of the characters through this world; I also liked how you took time to develop the relationship between Naruto and Kyuubi-sama...it was really touching! Thank you for sharing! Ja! ^-^