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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person dragonboy
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. As always Sakura is right bitch as always. Keep updating. This story as Orochimaru put it is alluring, snf interesting.
person oldie_joe
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hate to dissapoint you, chap, but I'm afraid Kyuubi means right what it is "Nine-tails" and has nothing to do with "sudden fire". Although I can kinda see where you're coming from, yes.

person yay
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! more more more!!
person Anna (and Yura)
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*does a happy dance* Take that you stupid snake BASTARD!
Go Naruto!! Teach him who is the one that rules here!
person asds
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaa...this story is so good! Goes to my fav web pages list
person LiLlAdY(not logged in)
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.................i cant even describe in words how great this chapter was, it just sucked me completely in and i couldn't look away not, even for a second i can wait for the next chapter hopefully you'll tell what tsukiyomi does
person eternallylaust
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;_; you... you... You left it at a cliffy. No fair! I wanna say that's it's going very very well. I wasn't disappointed when I started reading this and I'm constantly glued to my computer wondering if you'd written another chappy yet. ^___^ I have a life... really... no, really...
Can't wait for another chapter. I can just tell that Naruto's little secret is coming out very very soon which makes me /quiver/ in anticipation.
person ochibi-chwan
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I actually got shivers while reading this! It was that damn good! I love how you make Naruto cool, smart, and all powerful, but still a...dobe! I love it! Can't wait to read more!
person dace
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweetness! yey its the end of finals and what better way to enjoy it than with an awesome update! klasse! (with great class, or of an upper level, in other words-amazing) super! self explanatory i believe...hmm what else did i use....i dont remember... but yah! klasse as always!

love to have an update email!
dace
person SuishouTenshi
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, a new story that actually seems to worth reading. I'm only on the first chapter though, so I will go read more.

I was wondering how you fingured "kyuubi" would mean sudden fire when I realized... kyuuni, hi=bi... O.O

lol, but anyway, Kyuubi doesn't mean a sudden fire. It literately means "Nine Tails", although I do like what you've done with the sudden fire thing, I wonder it would really work like that if you piece the kanji together.

But anyway, getting off track, off to read more, yay!