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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Allys
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you've turned me blood thirsty!!! I want Naruto to rip that bitch to shreds. Hehehe tiny chunks of Orochimaru :) I should not be so happy about this. Anyway that was way too cool!! This story is just totally appealing to my way over the top sense of drama (Like Bleach) I LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto to get together, Finally!!!
person Sunset Serenity
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“I love you, Uchiha Sasuke. I would do anything for you.” “Then die!” “As you wish.”
As crazy as it might sound, I found that romantic. And the gold bracelet, was it a token of their declared love? That was a nice chapter!

Hope you’re ‘getting better.’
person dragonboy
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Dragonboy
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why did sasukes voice caught in his chest when he saw the braclets on 'Demonlord? Did he recognise them from the younger Naruto?
where they given to him by his mother? When will Naruto remove his henge? So many questions, please update A.S.A.P. Great story by the way, keeps it up.
O'h where deos the smut come in?
person Hello
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, leaving it at that. So much action. Please update soon! :D
person jess
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh!!!!!! so freakin' cool! please please please a million times over write more soon becuase i love this soooooooooooooooo much! thank you! it's amazing! i can't wait until naruto reveals himself! eee! and please say that we get hot sasukexnaruto sex... please? *puppy eyes* i love you! *HUG*
person Yukino
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil, evil auother! You are a woman correct? That's like the most evil place to leave off! Nooooooooo!!! You're
so mean!!!Now I can't wait to see happens next!!!!!!! Oh and sorry for not commenting last time. Geee!!!! I wuv how
you added the Kyuubi!!!!! Awwww!!! I LOVE foxes!!! I loved this chapter!! Heck I love all your
chapters!! I love this story!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! And now Naruto has claimed Sasuke!!! Or
did Sasuke claim Naruto? Hehe, I can't wait 'til Naruto reveils himself!!! Update soon please!

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person zrina
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Take that you evil snake bastard!!! You show 'em, Nomme de Plumme!!! Sweet piece of work, can't wait to see what happens next !!
person hanyou-elf
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gyah! how in the world have i missed this story? it's amazing. i love the originality and the creativity behind it and i am most definitely looking forward to another update, and one soon, hopefully. you've an amazing control of your characters and i truly love the way they interact with one another. argh! the angst in this story. so much angst, it's wonderful. you do a great job and i really, honestly can not wait for the next update. *puppy eyes* i do so hope that it's soon.

i like your lyrical quality. you write simply (no, it's not a bad thing) but it's complicated enough. you have your readers entrapped in this cycle of kitsune ritual, human angst, and the thought of losing that which is most precious to you. you leave the readers breathless, waiting with baited breath for the next time you grace us with your incredible writing talent and it never ceases to amaze and impress us. you are a talented writer and it's an honor to read this wonderful story. i do so hope you update soon, i will be waiting for it with baited breath.

~hanyou-elf
person cloudydayz
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Just Fantastic!! I love the perspective split (I really love perspective pieces). I have enjoyed every minute of reading this story. Great piece of writing!!!