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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person STARR*
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What about Anko? If you are going to kill Orochimaru in the next few chapters then are you going to kill Anko along with him? Or maybe Kazahaya already took care of her in the hospital. Either way I like Anko and I don't want to see her die.

Well done on the chapter btw. I really love how this story is comming along. Wasn't too impressed with the whole bath house thing, but eh, good story overall. I'm really looking foward to both the next chapter in this story, and "Here's to the Fox" as well.
person lo
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even With Naruto's little mind games, I really liked that last chapter. I can't wait to see more.
person AreYouLonelyForMe
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go Naruto!!! You so kicked ass!!! That was totally awsome!!! It was a perfect ten in my book!!!^^ Maybe Sakura is finally starting to realize!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Though I know that I must...it'll be a good time to practice my patience........(five seconds later)...alright I can't take it anymore!!! I've got to know what happens next!!! (hugs author) I luv ya so much for writing this story!!!! ^^
person XZanayu
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!! The village is saved and Naruto is so gonna kick Ori-whatever his name is ass from here to Hell, but he should give Sasuke the honor of killing him and I hope he does or better yet, give that jerk a fate soo bad he'll wish he was dead! Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
person Carmen
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hoi! when will the next chap come up? :P im itching for the next :P btw, great job! loved the last chap, as the others :)
person mike~
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah! that was so incredibly good!

the main hero's always fashionably late huh?

hum; so, sasuke giving naruto the family kimono, i guess that means either he accepts the declaration of marrage to the demon lord, or that he's finally accepted that its naruto under that guise!... but its hard to tell since both in sasuke's pov and his glazed filled eyes, its really hard to tell whether or not he know's that its naruto yet!

i cant wait to see what happened, althou this was a nice long chapter (thx!) i still felt it was too short XP! i hope naruto reveals himself soon!

update soon!
person COCO bean 1319
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love it, thank you for doing a NaruSasu *squeals like rediculce fangirl*. I also think this will be one of the few SasuNaru i like. Keep it Up.
person Kuri
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woww! xD *gushes* That was awesome!
I only found this story today, but I'm happy I found it!
>w< Looking forward to the next chapter!
Ohh.. and can you alert me too? Nyaa Thankyuuu~ *huggles*
person ladygizarme
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, had a few chapters to catch up on and i loved them ^_^ aaah i love how little by little sasuke is getting clues that it's naruto but he hasn't pieced them together yet, but i'm still so impatient for him to find out!! i'm so glad you update so regularly cuz i might go insane if not--i'm loving watching it all unfold and what's up with the bracelet?!! ack can't wait for next chap
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This story is so bloody brilliant! you must continue soon!
I hope Sasuke doesn't marry that bitch of a Sakura, made me so
angry her attitude. I told loved how Naruto told her off in the
bath house, heck no ones knows Sasuke like Naruto does.
You've done a great job, I really look foward to the next instalment of your story!

Seasons Greetings!