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Nein das darf doch nicht war sein!........raines gold eh! so super und classe. man das war, ah look at me spouting of in german! it was so amazing that I really had to think just now and switch languages. gomen *bow* sometimes I forget myself. -_-' english is not my first language, therefore I do not think in english, and thats why the grammar probably sux in my stories on here, neh? but anyhu, that was awesome, i was practically molesting my laptops scroll bar thingy to keep reading. wow, you know i wish i had a voice in my head that would tell me when to just shut up and be quiet. man, that would have SO helped me today, as it is....stupid creepy pervert. yeah ummm, if there is a mass murder incident in the FL region, IT WAS NOT ME! i swear it wasnt...*cough* but now what is sasuke gonna do...hmmm, well he saw something that he knew, hes sad, depressed, and that will lead to anger, which in turn would most likely be released on naruto. mann how would he handle that one? is he going to be a little "weak?" that would make it all the more emotional, sure hes sad and depressed, but add some slight physical weakness to it and, darn you've got one intense emotional scene. ok yah, i totaly have to stop watching people. But I mean there is SO much drama at my school its,,,,insane. thats where I get my stories from, well part of them at least....*i need to update chappy 3 come to think of it* yeah im working in it. but anyhu cant wait for more! this made my day, specially after all the stinkin exams. i mean kill the college kis why dont yah! well till another day!
ciao ciao

ps.i wouls love that notice!
dace

He's moving into Sasuke now, watch out Sakura. Not that I mean it for Sakura.

oh you are very right! I shall enjoy whatever u come up with. Hehe I like the idea of sasuke in bright pink! hehe but i enjoyed the part with them alone on the fourth's head. Still I wonder...just who had been in Naruto's room?!

Nice story. Please email me on the updates, thank you.

qiulyng@hotmail.com

MORE MORE!!!!!! this version of naruto is good!

*evil laugh* I will suggest for Naruto to make Sakura-breakfast, but he'll get an indigestion...
Anyway, great chapter! I bet that Sasuke already suspect Naruto's true identity.

That was a great chapter in the next one i hope there is more action between Naruto and Sasuke with tons of Sakura bashing ^-^

So much events happening. He's probably going to find out it's Naruto soon, eh?

This story keeps getting better and better!! More! Give us more!!! I don't take so long!!

thx for the update!

i really enjoyed this one, we're getting closer to sasuke finding out naruto's true identity! im guessing that the gold braclet has something to do w/ their past, and such, i can't wait to see how this runs thru!

btw, is naruto still in his glamour form? even w/ the injury and need of chakra to rest, is kyuubi the one holding up the illusion for naruto?

newaz, again, thx for the update, i look forward to the next one!