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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Sumey
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how much I like your story. And that you do a great job at writing. The story just keeps getting better and better.
person Lalala
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, what is that saying? "When you assume you make an ass out of 'u' and 'me'" Or something like that. Please update me.
person innerchild
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm supposed to be doing my homework... and got distracted. and then i saw you updated and i'm like, screw it, i'll do it later. it's only a journal entry... i can write that tomorrow in class. so, i had to read this. cause i'm in love with it and i really want sasuke to find out already! seriously, what the hell is going on? is he finally figuring some things out? i hope so. cause i want to see them get together already... although there's probably gonna be a lot of angst. hmm... can't wait.

hope you update soon and sorry to hear about your leg. just don't walk around on it if it still hurts like hell. i made that mistake like... four years ago and now my ankle is screwed up permanently. ah... i'm so smart.

later,
innerchild
person dramaelf
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Princess Bride lol
person Aidis
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I was reading some of the reviews and had to rant... WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH GIRLS AND ABREVIATING SHIT! *neways* I mean come on! I'm all for lol, and even a btw here and there.. but when every other word is some twisted letters? >.<

And while I'm on a roll here's something I've been supressing for a long time... What the hell. Is up with girls and gay porn? I mean... I'm a straight (maybe slightly bent) male... AND I DON'T EVEN LIKE LESBO PORN! And when I read a fic about it... I'm not going WHERE'S THE FUCKING SMUT! Actually... I've never read a lesbo fic... that's odd... Hmmm I dunno, I guess it is what it is. And it's not like I don't enjoy the shit. I wonder why I ranted to you? I guess I just had to get it off my chest... Anyways, update soon!
-Aidis
-Aidis
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter. i liked how naruto can change his clothes and the colors. -sigh- i wish i could do that. hmm, i would so pay to see sasuke in a pink shirt! if i had any money, that is. oh well. can't wait until you update. and ah maybe... naruto can get sakura alone sometime before the wedding and i don't know... take an arm or leg off. maybe her head. i wouldn't really mind which one. but something needs to happen to her.

until next time,
innerchild
person XZanayu
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised he didn't go back into a rage when that baka Sasuke agreed to move the wedding up. He's such a bakayaro!! And who was in Naruto room? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Sama
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg please I hope to gods that something happens where they'll be together! I am begging u! I hope ur feeling better girly! Great chapter! Ttul!
person Savin-me
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just whoa...O.O Action, intense moments, sadness and all the ofters feelings mixed up together. I’ll admit that few times I was holding my breath and mumbling ‘oh shit’ in same cases and throwing curses with the thought ‘kill them all Naruto, show them what you’re capable of’ * today I’m so evil*

I really wanted to torture and kill Sakura in every possible way (she’s not my fav character) and kick Sasuke’s ass for acting like a bastard!

Looking forward for new chapter! ^^”

person mike~
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sasuke's so adorable!

i know he's starting to warm up to naruto... i just dont really get why naruto doesn't want to show his real self; itd be so much easier to woo sasuke then.... unless he wants sasuke to accept what he's become now?

newaz, thx for you update, i hope injury heals soon! i can't wait for you next update!