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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Zuka
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i do hope you update soon. i can wait to read more!^_^
person Allys
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL this story is way to cute!!
person Pickle
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! And AWEEE!! I love this chapter!! Naruto would die if he didn't get to be with sasuke. Whaaaaaaaa! Apple pie hopes! hhahahahaaa! I especially loved the onigiri part. I don't like breakfast items alot either.
person Sunset Serenity
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely chapter! It would be really nice if Sasuke accepts Naruto without knowing Naruto is his bride. Naruto may need a good excuse why he disappear for 15 years though.

Hope you're feeling better.
person airhead622
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!
i loooooooooooovle this story
it's really original
it's also good to have to wait a while
4 the smutt...
there will b smutt.... right???
(plzzzzzzzzzz let there b smutt)
*pleads with god*

so ermmmmmmmm yeah
update soon and i'll lovle u 4ever??
k.byes
^.^
person Casandra
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I don't know if I gave my email for updates.
person Casandra
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Darn forgot to give the email again. It's blcgothchick@yahoo.com.
person Dragonboy
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
On thing that has to be done first! * Grabs Sakura by the hair throws her into the air, gets a cricket bat and shoots her into orbit* (That was my Skaura bashing muse, funny no?)
Well now that 'person' is out of the way, things can go smoother no? Update soon please.
Ssauke cares, yeah. *Calms down*
person eternallylaust
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this one. A very good AU and I wish to read more. I haven't laughed like that for a fic in a long time.
person Sunset Serenity
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Naruto was vocal and funny but very Naruto. He was like that in the show. As Naruto always had certain effects on others, it’s believable that his speech did him and Sasuke some good. Can’t wait to see whether he’d earned himself the acceptance of his offer. ^_^

For your response to my review for "all that really matters," thank you so much. That was more that I’d expected. I was merely expressing my humble thought. I’ll be patiently looking forward for "it." Thanks.

My email address is: serenity.sama@yahoo.com ^_^