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yes! please let sasuke kick sakura to the streets!

The last part kind of confused me. About the Kitsune part, it's probably me, since I'm a bit slow at getting things so I have to read it over and over again. Sadly... Update soon please. :D

Chapter 4 - Well, that revelation rolled around faster than I thought it would. Looks like Sasuke is going to get upset and confused before Naruto can tell him in a less traumatic manner that he is the long lost best friend and betrothed. At this point all it would take for Sasuke to recognise him would be for Naruto to change his hair to blond and his eyes to blue. I'm really enjoying this story, and I thank you for not dragging it out. On to the mating! Out with the baby--or do kitsunes have litters? Maybe this story will be one of those rare critters we so seldom see, where the Uchiha actually lets that four-letter-L-word cross his teeth. I'm dying to see Daddy-Sasuke overpowered by squalling baby-Narutos. Bring it on! Oh, did I mention I like your writing? AND your imagination? Keep up the good work.

YAY nother chap!!!! so glad!! but what will sasuke do!! *frets in seat* Plz update soon!!

This is getting really, really good!! I like the alternate histories and situations that you put the characters in, this story and HttF!! Great read!!

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MY........
GOD........
This is one of my top five favorites, I fucking love it. I have one suggestion, have Sasuke uke. Like mabey have Naruto change Sasuke into a demon (like swapping blood or a ritual)or Kabuto did do a freaky experiment.(*drools* fucking hot demon Sasuke. Does Naruto have ears or a tail? He should. If you go with my suggestion of demon Sasuke please make him a wolf demon. Fluffy ears and tail.) I hate a femine or uke Naruto. Sasuke should always be uke. Remember sasUKe. By the way.... YOU ROCK MY FUCKING RAINBOW COLORED SOCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

What will Sasuke's answer be to Naruto's proprosition be? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Very interesting! I'm already hooked on this story!! It's very wonderfully written and I love how you portrade the
characters! (Oh gods I know I spelled that wrong) Very good, I love everything about this. Please update soon.

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duh duh duuuuhhh. you must continue this! i love it so far and simply cannot wait for more!
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Naruto's angst is my source of entertainment! Not that him being in emotional pain is ok, but it makes for more pity... and hating Sasuke and Sakura!... and questions of how/why there's such a union. I love it. Aw, Naru, it's going to be okay... hopefully not until a long time, so angst will be deeply rooted. Ok, maybe I'm too emo.