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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know the SasuSaku will be temporary (at least I'm assuming so because the summary has SasuNaru), but EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate the SasuSaku pairing, everytime I see it I just cringe and avert my eyes. I just don't understand how anyone could like it, ugh.
I noticed in your a/n that you seem to be planning to only do 2 more chapters and an epilogue, is there a reason for this? And how much SasuNaru are we going to get to see? And mpreg too, can't forget the mpreg? Are we actually going to get to see any of it or will it just remain mentioned as a possibility but never come to fruition?
Anyways, I do like your story so for (though I'm gagging at the SasuSaku) and I'm still sort of hoping that you'll make it longer. There are some people who say there are too many Naruto mpregs but in my opinion there really aren't enough. So when I find one, one that seems to actually be written by an author who isn't just blech, I just get excited.
I noticed in your a/n that you seem to be planning to only do 2 more chapters and an epilogue, is there a reason for this? And how much SasuNaru are we going to get to see? And mpreg too, can't forget the mpreg? Are we actually going to get to see any of it or will it just remain mentioned as a possibility but never come to fruition?
Anyways, I do like your story so for (though I'm gagging at the SasuSaku) and I'm still sort of hoping that you'll make it longer. There are some people who say there are too many Naruto mpregs but in my opinion there really aren't enough. So when I find one, one that seems to actually be written by an author who isn't just blech, I just get excited.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seriously? Only 5 chapters and you can finish it. Gosh, this is really really really well written. And what an interesting plotline. Ah, and Sasuke thinks he's dead. I thought that was so interesting how he said Itachi. LOL talk about oops. And I loved that line about the twin holes... the one in the tree and the one in his heart. I was like aww. Naruto really loves Sasuke! But Sasuke is about the least lovable person in the world! Yay, I wanna know what happens next because I have like NO idea whatsoever. I shoulda reviewed earlier but I'm a jerk. A bachelor party for Sasuke? That is really really hard to imagine. So good luck w/ that ^_^
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hhehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh hehe he, i locve it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i writing to damn fast cuz i want to get this posted hmm i wonder how many mistakes i made, omg i love this!! finish weriting it already...heheheheheheheheheheheh iu love love love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finish plzzz!!! i wanna read more waaaaaa!!! hehe i ,ove itsunes,,,,,,,okay lost of spelling msajes, hope u can read it XD
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hhehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh hehe he, i locve it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i writing to damn fast cuz i want to get this posted hmm i wonder how many mistakes i made, omg i love this!! finish weriting it already...heheheheheheheheheheheh iu love love love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finish plzzz!!! i wanna read more waaaaaa!!! hehe i ,ove itsunes,,,,,,,okay lost of spelling msajes, hope u can read it XD
oops for got to put my name...
oops for got to put my name...
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like your pen name too. :P
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Im actually scared of Naruto. Good Job! *thumbs up* I love the way everythings come together so far. Really, you have skills! Love the story! Oh and you are so mean for ending the chapter like that! Anyway, please keep writing, you have fans to please! ^^ Im looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah! i was suprised w/ that cliffie!
i cant wait to see what happens, how will naruto get sasuke back? was sasuke marrying sakura for love, for companionship, for pity, or for duty?
update soon!
i cant wait to see what happens, how will naruto get sasuke back? was sasuke marrying sakura for love, for companionship, for pity, or for duty?
update soon!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so pleased to finally see a story where Naruto didn't have to live through hell as he grew up. He seems so calm and yet powerful, it's a pleasant change about. He has a great task to accomplish and only a few days in which to do it. I'm looking forward to seeing how you work this out. Good presentation of plot in just two chapters.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NANNNNI?!? NOOOO :'( Sasuke is getting married to Sakura noooooo fuckin bitch :| Naruto so deserves Sasuke i love this story its addictive and i think someone needs to write another chapter :D or else ill poke you
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These goddamn cliffhangers, they'll be death for me! Anyway, I really like this story and Naruto being so stubbornly stuck to his promises. It's so like him! I'm looking forward to the next chapters, since I'm sure you're not going to let Sasuke marry Sakura... right?