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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person COCO bean 1319
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NaruSasu sasUKe lets bring the uke back in sasUKE, kay ;)
person lo
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ending, that was fun. Nice work.
person zrina
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored the last chapter! I love how you ended it, it was fantastic!!!!
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaa yay, wonderful finale! wonderful story all through, love love love!! thank you thank you thank you!!

and as a post note, woot for sasUKE in this ending! i love when they share roles, and somehow the fact that sasuke as uke isn't as prevalant makes that even hotter ^__^

oh yeah, final thought, was wondering what the boys' true eye colors turned out to be after their chakra settled?
person Drarry Radton
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weet, weet! *whistle, whistle, whistle* This is the best story on my list. Thank you for bringing it into existance.
person Exane
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KYAA~ such a sweet ending! <3!!
Wow o.o Twins? Sasuke's sperm sure are competitive and active!! XDDDD
Thank you for the great story ;)! I look forward to reading more of your stories ^_^
person eirian
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A great ending. You wrapped up just about everything. My one question is whether they actually had heard the last of Itachi or not. I can't see him giving up that easily. But that part of the story wouldn't really fit the tone of Kitsune no yomeiri.

Wonderful fic.

By the way, are you planning to continue here's to the fox?
person animehead
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I loved it. Such a happy ending! You are so talented. I am overjoyed at the feeling that this story left me with. You really rock. Awesome, but then again, you always are! Congratulations on finishing such a wonderful and successful story!
person shiryudesu
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I can't wait to read more of your work. I'm voting for a SasuxNaru relationship.
person Allys
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending, Those were some beautiful chibis, for a second there I thought kyuubi had found a way out, but then I realised that evenif he hadn't it would excellent thatr he was in there with them and propably got to be one of the first people to know them. Wow, poor Sakura, but I don't really like her much, and I think you did good with 'tachi-san. I adore the very ending, that they got to still be alive and the littles in the classroom, nice touch, very cyclic. Last but definitely not least THANKS for the smut, I love Naruto-seme, XD. Congratutlations on completion, not a small accomplishment by any means!!!