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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I was right; where you took the plot is sooo much better than where I thought it was going! That just goes to show why you’re the writer and I’m the reader. Anyway though, I’m ecstatic that you finished the fic, and it was positively wonderful. I think I have to agree with you that chapter 13 is one of the best things that you have ever written, at lest of what I have seen that is. The lemon was really…how should I put this? Sensuous, hot, and erotic should cover it I think. Also, the WAFF was great, and really refreshing. Everything else I’ve been reading lately has been steeped in way too much angst; and I can admit to the fact that more than anything I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for delivering another great fic (and educating me on the exact meaning of WAFF!). I’m curious though what else there could possibly be to have an epilogue? Well regardless I look forward to reading it.
On the subject of your next work, to be honest the plot line involving Sasuke as a writer seems more interesting and original to me. I’ve seen too many of the whole “Sasuke and Naruto meet as children/teenagers and Naruto is able to make Sasuke ‘feel things’ and be happy” sort of thing. Not that I don’t have confidence in you that you could breathe new life into the plot and make into a really great fic, I just think that for someone of your caliber, you could do so much more with the second plot line. That’s just my opinion though. Oh and as a little note for future reference, I’m also a sucker for Naruto/Sasuke, with Sasuke being uke that is. After them it’s Neji/Gaara. I know you’re not doing a fic with that pairing, but I just thought I’d throw that in there under the FYI category. Anyway though, great job and I look forward to the epilogue and whatever you come out with next. My best wishes for you and your writing.
P.S. By the way, whatever happended to "Here's to the Fox"? Did you abandon that fic?
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
On the subject of your next work, to be honest the plot line involving Sasuke as a writer seems more interesting and original to me. I’ve seen too many of the whole “Sasuke and Naruto meet as children/teenagers and Naruto is able to make Sasuke ‘feel things’ and be happy” sort of thing. Not that I don’t have confidence in you that you could breathe new life into the plot and make into a really great fic, I just think that for someone of your caliber, you could do so much more with the second plot line. That’s just my opinion though. Oh and as a little note for future reference, I’m also a sucker for Naruto/Sasuke, with Sasuke being uke that is. After them it’s Neji/Gaara. I know you’re not doing a fic with that pairing, but I just thought I’d throw that in there under the FYI category. Anyway though, great job and I look forward to the epilogue and whatever you come out with next. My best wishes for you and your writing.
P.S. By the way, whatever happended to "Here's to the Fox"? Did you abandon that fic?
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again! I just can't stay away....the story is just too good!! Sorry for not reviewing for so long I was spending time with my family and you know how that can be....took up most of my time. Anyways I really liked those last two chapters!!! I wonder if Naruto will have a boy or a girl.-is hoping that it's a boy...or maybe a twin boy and girl- I wonder what they'll look like...It would be funny if the baby ended up looking just like Naruto but had Sasuke's personality!! That would be a sight to see!! Know that Sasuke's threat didn't put me up to this review...Sasuke couldn't hurt me...he doesn't have the courage...-grins evilly- I can't wait until you next update!!! ^_-
-Jason
-Jason
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, I realy like your story & its going in a great direction
For the untitled story, I think that Sasuke would be a great proud uke (not proud of being a uke, just a proud SOB that's a uke)
For the untitled story, I think that Sasuke would be a great proud uke (not proud of being a uke, just a proud SOB that's a uke)
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Naruto is pregnant! *happy~~*
Sasuke better treat Naruto good at the village XDDD!!
update again XDD
Sasuke better treat Naruto good at the village XDDD!!
update again XDD
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you made me wait an entire holiday for this fic i demand more......you tease
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! The ending to this story was wonderful! Great job!
I'm also looking forward to reading Dost Thou Know and Untitled.
As for the poll:
NaruSasu! [uke sasuke! Yeah!]
I'm also looking forward to reading Dost Thou Know and Untitled.
As for the poll:
NaruSasu! [uke sasuke! Yeah!]
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah, double update!
thx so much for updating both chapters (and thx to the 30 something reviews that prompted it!) i loved both chapters dearly!
for the previous chapter, i was squeeling with glee when sasuke cancelled the wedding! i was like "wohoo! finally!" how long has sasuke suspected that naruto was in disguise? was it from when he first saw the bracelet? then did he recognize naruto for who he was instead of an illusion when he was drunk? what about when he woke up? why didn't he stay beside him - or did he set off to set things right and cancel the wedding right then and there - but couldn't he have waited for naruto to wake up first? maybe he was still a little bitter than naruto didn't tell him the secret earlier. but then, was he being sarcastic in the dungen when the vassal called "naruto-sama" to confirm his identitiy for sure?
i loved how you introduced sasuke at the end of the former chapter, i can just imagine the smirk on his face when he proclaimed that he was the "betrothed"... lol, that was really great!
and the latter chapter was just as amazing! it gave me a WAFF all over - i mean, what better way than to confirm the eternal love for one another than making love in the detention cell and grunting out marriage proposals?? lol, it was great i tell ya! but i sorta didn't get the rain part, does that mean that the leaf ninjas that gathered outside were not invited to join in the ceremony? even tsunade and the rest? was sasuke really alright with giving up his itachi quest and his konoha ninja status? ... and as the "great lord's b!tch" what kind of duties will he be doing? as in, he's not gonna moop around all day, is he gonna rule alongside naruto?
i really loved the binding/bonding part between sasuke and naruto- about sharing life and his life force, the change of the destiny was really nice too! the earings were a great touch and much more intimate than a normal wedding ring b/c it can't be removed!
thx for writing this fic, i can't wait for your epilogue.
oh, as for ur upcoming fics... my vote is that sasuke gets paired up w/ naruto! =)
thx so much for updating both chapters (and thx to the 30 something reviews that prompted it!) i loved both chapters dearly!
for the previous chapter, i was squeeling with glee when sasuke cancelled the wedding! i was like "wohoo! finally!" how long has sasuke suspected that naruto was in disguise? was it from when he first saw the bracelet? then did he recognize naruto for who he was instead of an illusion when he was drunk? what about when he woke up? why didn't he stay beside him - or did he set off to set things right and cancel the wedding right then and there - but couldn't he have waited for naruto to wake up first? maybe he was still a little bitter than naruto didn't tell him the secret earlier. but then, was he being sarcastic in the dungen when the vassal called "naruto-sama" to confirm his identitiy for sure?
i loved how you introduced sasuke at the end of the former chapter, i can just imagine the smirk on his face when he proclaimed that he was the "betrothed"... lol, that was really great!
and the latter chapter was just as amazing! it gave me a WAFF all over - i mean, what better way than to confirm the eternal love for one another than making love in the detention cell and grunting out marriage proposals?? lol, it was great i tell ya! but i sorta didn't get the rain part, does that mean that the leaf ninjas that gathered outside were not invited to join in the ceremony? even tsunade and the rest? was sasuke really alright with giving up his itachi quest and his konoha ninja status? ... and as the "great lord's b!tch" what kind of duties will he be doing? as in, he's not gonna moop around all day, is he gonna rule alongside naruto?
i really loved the binding/bonding part between sasuke and naruto- about sharing life and his life force, the change of the destiny was really nice too! the earings were a great touch and much more intimate than a normal wedding ring b/c it can't be removed!
thx for writing this fic, i can't wait for your epilogue.
oh, as for ur upcoming fics... my vote is that sasuke gets paired up w/ naruto! =)
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finaly an update i was looking for ur story! of course my fave couple is always sasunaru! so my vote is for them
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did I ever tell you how much I love your Fic!
I am so thrilled with this latest instalment! I'm smiling all over my face now lol.
So the important people to Naruto now know his true identity, its about time, I am
glad its has been taken so well, and well I am pleased that Sasuke called off the
wedding and the Sakura was put in her place. Damn those villagers though grrrrrrrr.
Wow I had no idea Sasuke had been following Naruto its a good thing he was there
to catch him before the fall! He was very brave before those foxes, I would have
been terrified in his place but such are things we do in the name of love.
I love everything, superb job
Happy New Year To You as well :D
I am so thrilled with this latest instalment! I'm smiling all over my face now lol.
So the important people to Naruto now know his true identity, its about time, I am
glad its has been taken so well, and well I am pleased that Sasuke called off the
wedding and the Sakura was put in her place. Damn those villagers though grrrrrrrr.
Wow I had no idea Sasuke had been following Naruto its a good thing he was there
to catch him before the fall! He was very brave before those foxes, I would have
been terrified in his place but such are things we do in the name of love.
I love everything, superb job
Happy New Year To You as well :D