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for Kitsune no Yomeiri

by BishounenKrazed

person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chapter was perfect in every way, the emotions, descriptions, reactions,the circumstance and the two being together with no
pretences. It was sooo worth the wait and I can see why it is your favourite, it must have been a pleasure to write.

I love the lemon, hehe,seriously Kudos! You are an incredible writer XD.
person SharinganEyes
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-tear- oh it was wonderful I'm so happy right now. I loved that they got matching earrings and everything! hehe also I think Kakshi would make a good dad, for Sasuke.
I'm sure you;ll explain as to why they have different last names and all. Also...well I know it's over done but I can't help but be a fan of SasuNaru.
I mean you do such wonderful work with them as a pairing..and well Damnit I want a Seme Sasuke. All the Naru-seme fans are starting to rise up and voice that Naruto shall no longer be uke anymore...and well... I same damn them XP cause sasuke's sexy on top!
So yep Seme Sasuke! Woot! and...well...Uchiha comes before Uzumaki in the abc's right?!?!?!

So why shouldn't Sasuke be on top. Also I know Naruto comes before Sasuke...but! In Japan you go by last name first so boo! Mwhahahaha Sasuke-seme forver!!!

Hehe okay my rant's over. Great job, love the story, can't wait to read the others!
person emeraldstar0022
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg...amazing story....i have been waiting so long to read these chapters...i was beginning to get worried...i loved how you ended it...so cute...Uchiha Naruto...awwwwwwwwwww :D...thank u for writing this...oh and ur upcoming fic...sound so good cant wait...and for the one about sasuke...so pair him with naruto...and only as the seme...we all know naruto loves being dominated...and make such a great uke too..hehe...anyway cant wait for you next stories!!!

ja
person Yaoi-Gi-oh
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story and keep up with those updates, I want to see more!!!!!!

As for the little input in the end of chapter 13... it will be of course SasuNaru coupling (except if will be any of one side SakuSasu), KakaIru (Hell yeah in this story....ppppplz!)... and from Naruto's attitude from the little paragraph, I'd say he'd be the seme, but if you think about it Naruto has more femenin looks than Sasuke, and well it will be abit(if not alot) out of his character from anime (but then again this fanfic)wouldn't be weird?

So my vote will be: Sasuke= seme, Naruto=uke/ in case of Irakaka--> Kakashi= seme, Iruka= uke!!
person ladygizarme
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaahhh yayayayayayayayay omg i loved it!!! their reunion in sasuke's cell--sasuke's awe at naruto carrying his child ahh i loved it so much it made me tear up, and the lemon--yummmm, especially loved the mid-coital proposal lol, twas hotttt

kyaaa the wedding ceremony was sweet! haha how many children ARE they gonna have? ahh i loved this so much, can't wait for the epi!!

as for the impending stories, both sound good but i hafta say the sasuke-as-a-writer one is much more intriguing for a couple reasons--it sounds quite different and fun, and i'm really getting bored of KakaIru always being paired in SasuNaru fics.. no offense lol, that pairing just doesn't do it for me.. ummm sooo in the writer story, well i'm inclined to say i'd like NaruSasuNaru (y'know, they can share the role of uke, it's much more fun and realistic that way hehehe--and if i hafta make a choice i usually prefer naru as seme but it's not as prevalent as SasuNaru so i just deal ne..) when it comes to sasuke, it's really hard for me to see him with anyone else but naruto (unless it's itachi lol) whereas it's easier to accept naruto with others (but sasuke's almost always my preference if he's an option :p)

anyway, so that's my two cents, can't wait to see what you decide

~ lg
person animehead
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I love you so much. I think the last chapter was my favorite. So sweet! I enjoy reading your work so much.

Anyway, I vote Sasuke and Naruto (no suprise there) as for whether Sasuke is uke or seme, it doesn't really matter. You don't even have to label him as such. It'd be a change just to have them go at it without the labels as uke or seme, but that's just my thoughts I guess.

Anyway, once again, I love your work so much. Thanks for sharing!
person littleolmee
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a quick update. Very nice ending, like how you tied the title in at the end. It was a very cute story, can't wait to see more from you, take care.
person littleolmee
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a quick update. Very nice ending, like how you tied the title in at the end. It was a very cute story, can't wait to see more from you. The preview of that other story sounded very interesting, I'll keep my eye out for it. As far as pairings my fav with Sasuke is Sas/Nar (seme/uke) but it is your story so you do how ever you like and trust me you won't hear a bad word from me either way. Take care.
person fluffy_cloud
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally! thank you so much for the story! love ya so much! still waiting for the epilogue ^^ keep updating

for the vote, hmmm, i only like sasunaru/narusasu so that's the only pairing i would vote. about sasuke being a seme/uke, for me, it doesn't matter but sasuke being a seme i think suits with his attitude (sort of) ;P
person Exane
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww! What a sweet end! Thanks for writing this great fic ;D I'm truly touched!
about the poll thingy, definitely SasuNaru and in SasuNaru, Sasuke is always the seme!! Just cause his name has the 'uke' word in it, doesn't mean he is!! No one even pronounces Sasuke's name as Sas-uke <_