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for Thicker than Blood

by kimikoyuki

person Tsukashi
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, EVIL EVIL EVIL Cliffhanger!!! (Like I'm one to talk with the evil cliffy I just left on my story ^_^) I was rooting for Itachi, even though I had a feeling when he demanded for her to yell his name that Sasuke was there. At the beginning of the chapter, I was rooting for Sasuke. But Sakura is in love with Itachi and Sasuke is a selfish lover - if he weren't, she wouldn't be frigid in bed with him. I'm actually expecting a character death. I dunno which of the 3 - prolly Sakura because she is the pawn in this whole scheme and too blinded to even realize it. Update as soon as you can please.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh so good. It's not as angsty as I was expecting which makes me really happy! Update soon! I can't wait to read more.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Tank
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I was rather worried that this was gonna be a let's-make-Sasuke-a-total-and-complete-bastard-so-Sakura-can-get-together-with-X. Good thing chapter 4 came along and proved me wrong! ^_^ Woot! Can't wait for the confrontation!
person tsukashi
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! When I first started reading this, I thought cliche. This has been done before. But your writing was better than most, so I kept reading. I'm glad I did. This is REALLY good. Ok, you have a few mistakes here and there, mostly typo types of things, nothing that majorly detracts from the story. And I was just discussing with some fellow authors earlier tonight how something that is cliche can turn out to be the best fictions and you are proving that point. You do such a wonderful job with the views and the inner thoughts and characterization. I look forward to reading more.
person akasha
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG the tension is going to KILL ME! This story is toying with my emotions!! Please update soon.... I'm DYING to find out what Sasuke does when he finds out who has stolen Sakura's heart!! Awesome story so far, i will definitely be looking out for the update. Please don't leave me hanging....