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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT!!! Where did you go??!?!?!? I find these awesome stories that seem to have more story to tell, but they cut off in the middle and were updated YEARS ago *cries* come back!!!!!! Please???
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know how this goes on! I don't know why you haven't updated in so long, but if you come back sometime, and this (or any - preferably every finished (NOT Xover)) story is finished, I'd be more than happy if you could post, or e-mail me it (them)! I love your writing style!
Thanks for the story so far!
My e-mail is demoninmysoul@gmail.com
Thanks for the story so far!
My e-mail is demoninmysoul@gmail.com
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a great fanfiction. I hope it's a GaaraNaruto. I like this because everything indicates that Gaara loves Naruto and Naruto also cares for Gaara. I hope Sasuke doesn't get forgiven by Naruto.
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! please update!! You can't just leave it hanging! its really interesting! >.<
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im kinda sad that this story never took off. It has such a bright future. So many things you could do with it...Oh well my goal it to read all your work that yaoi so thats what I'm doing!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in an unusual situation here. I love your story and have been hooked to the screen since finding it. It's well written, well paced, and makes me really interested in what happens. My only fear is that he'll wind up with Sasuke (yes, I'm in the 'I hate Sasuke' camp), but somehow that's not enough to stop me from reading it. It may not seem like it, but I mean that as a testament to how much I like your story. Now...Neji, Shika, or Gaara..I'd go for any of them hands down! Heck, I'd go for all three!
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh!
I like it!
So Naruto left and came back a stud?
Sexy-amazing!
=3
I like it!
So Naruto left and came back a stud?
Sexy-amazing!
=3
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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i hate myself. =_= i didn't see the captcha down there and clicked -review- without writing down the words, so i lost all the long review i wrote a second ago. that plainly sucks. =_=
need to rewrite it again *cries hard*
..
ahem.
so, don't blame me if i want to go and cling to one of the few good authors still around and still writing. darn, with such a shortage of great authors, don't tell me off for being clingy *clings* you're a great author ;_;
so for the fic. it's really great. I like the flow, it makes you get into it so much that when i saw i was at the last available chapter, i growled in despair. write more? please?
the plot is interesting a lot, with naruto coming back from his trip with jiraiya changed, but not too much (his cunning, funny side is still around, with his comments, his actions, even his fooling around with genma... and the hints genrai were love :D ), and i want to know more of what he went through in this period when he was away.
he got to know of his family, which is awesome (should have happened withIN canonline too).
Oh, gaara. gaara is so LOVE. I want to cheer for this pairing but i fear that when neji and shika appear, i might go and cheer for them too. so what about a fourthsome? huh? huh? :D joking XDD (well, not completely).
(notice how i ignore sasuke. notice it!)
i like how you have all characters being IC. what with Iruka's hesitance with naruto's return and his happiness in having his feelings of fatherly love for naruto returned :) it makes my heart warm how you managed to catch this insecurity of him and neutralise it at the same time with all the love they have for each other.
(that is why i can see iruka as naruto's dad and flinch when people pair them up together, but i don't mind minatonaruto as a pairing ... >.> i'm strange, right? o.o)
anyway. i also liked how you portrayed naruto's feelings for sasuke. he's not going all 'omg sasuke is love need to go to him and tell him', he's not 'omg he'll never love me so i'm going to angst here' and he's not even going 'omg i suddenly hate him'.
no, he's admitting he still loves sasuke, and he's honest with himself, because he knows that in the eventuality of sasuke returning his feelings, he would accept him and forgive him. he knows that eventually sasuke will hurt him, and he will hurt sasuke with his inability to bear children.
and he's not ready to face sasuke, nor to accept whatever comes of them.
it's just how a person would react in this situation, how NARUTO would act. it's IC, and i appreciate it so much :)
so, i have only one complain -lack of chapters. are you still writing this? i hope you are... pretty please? with a naked naruto with a cherry in his mouth on top? X3
Cepheus/SOY/MF
i hate myself. =_= i didn't see the captcha down there and clicked -review- without writing down the words, so i lost all the long review i wrote a second ago. that plainly sucks. =_=
need to rewrite it again *cries hard*
..
ahem.
so, don't blame me if i want to go and cling to one of the few good authors still around and still writing. darn, with such a shortage of great authors, don't tell me off for being clingy *clings* you're a great author ;_;
so for the fic. it's really great. I like the flow, it makes you get into it so much that when i saw i was at the last available chapter, i growled in despair. write more? please?
the plot is interesting a lot, with naruto coming back from his trip with jiraiya changed, but not too much (his cunning, funny side is still around, with his comments, his actions, even his fooling around with genma... and the hints genrai were love :D ), and i want to know more of what he went through in this period when he was away.
he got to know of his family, which is awesome (should have happened withIN canonline too).
Oh, gaara. gaara is so LOVE. I want to cheer for this pairing but i fear that when neji and shika appear, i might go and cheer for them too. so what about a fourthsome? huh? huh? :D joking XDD (well, not completely).
(notice how i ignore sasuke. notice it!)
i like how you have all characters being IC. what with Iruka's hesitance with naruto's return and his happiness in having his feelings of fatherly love for naruto returned :) it makes my heart warm how you managed to catch this insecurity of him and neutralise it at the same time with all the love they have for each other.
(that is why i can see iruka as naruto's dad and flinch when people pair them up together, but i don't mind minatonaruto as a pairing ... >.> i'm strange, right? o.o)
anyway. i also liked how you portrayed naruto's feelings for sasuke. he's not going all 'omg sasuke is love need to go to him and tell him', he's not 'omg he'll never love me so i'm going to angst here' and he's not even going 'omg i suddenly hate him'.
no, he's admitting he still loves sasuke, and he's honest with himself, because he knows that in the eventuality of sasuke returning his feelings, he would accept him and forgive him. he knows that eventually sasuke will hurt him, and he will hurt sasuke with his inability to bear children.
and he's not ready to face sasuke, nor to accept whatever comes of them.
it's just how a person would react in this situation, how NARUTO would act. it's IC, and i appreciate it so much :)
so, i have only one complain -lack of chapters. are you still writing this? i hope you are... pretty please? with a naked naruto with a cherry in his mouth on top? X3
Cepheus/SOY/MF
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories... you haven't updated this one in a long time.... will you??? or are you going to leave it. It's quite good! REally, I love the characters
Slave
Slave
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loooved it